Coin-Operated Despair

The vending machine, though filled to the brim now stands with a sign, my joy growing dim out of order it reads, my heart does break my cravings increase, my tummy it aches The machine that once brought me such delight Now brings forth frustration and wicked spite The products it holds are now out of reach Leaving me feeling sad, empty, and weak The coins I spent before seeing the sign Money I wasted, my wallet does pine Cruel vending machine, I think I may cry From the hunger and thirst, surely I’ll die But still, I have hope in my shattered heart In the future when this machine will start Dispensing the treats that I love to eat Look— a working machine I’ve yet to meet!
*I wrote this poem on January 26, 2024, as part of a ’30 days of poetry’ January challenge. This was day 26 and the prompt was: Write about your feelings when there is an out-of-order sign on a vending machine.
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Date: 2/28/2024 5:10:00 AM
Dear Courtney, Your poem is a hilarious take on everyday frustrations! The unexpected "out of order" sign and the escalating emotions are relatable in a way that makes us chuckle. With the discovery of a working machine, the shift from despair to hope at the end is a perfect touch. Very creative and relatable. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/29/2024 8:43:00 AM
Thank you Sir. It was a fun, silly poem to write.
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