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Coffee House

My coffee, my house, cinnamon and hint of clove in a full bodied french roast... acrid, bitter, pungent deliciousness wafts thought the air before even the eyes are open the buzz of conversation over the tinkling of spoons stirring the clanking of cup on saucer the shooshing of steamy cream into cappuccino a lush, rich aroma, with the feeling of rightness around the edges like a cozy blanket of comfort wrapping around your shoulders Sipping in silence, watching the sunrise, simple serenity to start the day. ©6/18/12

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Graphite Drug

Date: 6/20/2016 1:23:00 PM

A beautiful and simple poem. Your use of white space to contribute to meter is awesome. Your patience to work with this site's posting capabilities is to be applauded. Another great read.

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/17/2016 12:01:00 AM

A celebration of sense organs ...

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/17/2016 10:08:00 AM

It's nice to evoke the senses, don't you think Probir? Thank you to taking the time to read and comment on my poem! ~Trudy~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2016 9:49:00 AM

I love a good coffee poem, Trudy. The best part of this poem is the imagery that surrounds rich aroma you penned well... Even I'd like a taste of cinnamon and a hint of clove... Linda

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/17/2016 10:06:00 AM

So glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!! ~Trudy~

Tammy Flanagan

Date: 7/15/2012 8:21:00 AM

Very nice! It brings back childhood memories. I would wake-up each morning to the smell of coffee....thank-you for taking me down memory lane again!--Love, Tammy--

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/11/2016 10:53:00 PM

My pleasure Tammy! And thank you for your lovely comment.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2012 8:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Coffee House" contest Trudy. Love, Carol

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/29/2012 12:38:00 PM

Thank you Carol! :-D ~Trudy~

David Williams

Date: 6/29/2012 1:55:00 AM

Trudy congrats on your win. what a way to a day...David

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/29/2012 12:37:00 PM

Yes, it's a peaceful start to the day, give me time to gather my thoughts, and give thanks for the new dawn! ~Trudy~

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/28/2012 8:35:00 PM

Trudy, great to read your work this evening. This might be the first poem I have read of yours. Here's what I like about your winning write...the only object making noise is your comforting brew... an onomatopoeia delight!! ....I wonder if anyone wrote of the health benefits of coffee...Still have a few more to go! Congrats again. gwendolen

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/29/2012 12:35:00 PM

Gwendolen, thank you for your comment and praises on my piece here, I have to admit, I had to look up "onomatopoeia' BUT I love learning new words so thank you for that also! ::grin:: ~Trudy~

Samia Ali Salama

Date: 6/28/2012 5:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in this contest Trudy! :)

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/29/2012 12:31:00 PM

Thank you Samia!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/28/2012 3:27:00 PM

Congrats on your terrific win, Trudy! I'm not a coffee drinker, but after reading this, I feel like I'm missing out! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/29/2012 12:31:00 PM

This is a real honor for you to say so, I hope you enjoy it as much as I do, the cinnamon makes all the difference in the world, I just a teaspoon in the grounds when brewing.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2012 1:52:00 PM

Trudy, yours was simply the BEST. Congratulations to you. I love a number one but I have to admit, I thought yours was better than mine!!!

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/29/2012 12:28:00 PM

What a wonderful compliment Andrea! Thank you for saying so! I thought yours was very well written too! ~Trudy~

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 6/28/2012 1:13:00 PM

'tinkling of spoons' -must add to the anticipation. Sounds like a nice way to start the day. Congrats on your win Trudy!

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/29/2012 12:26:00 PM

Thank you Vicky!

Tanya Harrington

Date: 6/28/2012 12:37:00 PM

Mmmmm what a yummy write, Congrats Trudy! Tanya

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/29/2012 12:26:00 PM

I think so, ::grin:: Thanks Tanya!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/28/2012 11:24:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your expressive, descriptive and creative work about coffee..I can just see, feel, and catch a waft of the scented morn's air..Congrats on your win..Sara

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/29/2012 12:23:00 PM

Thank you Sara and for the nice compliment also! ~Trudy~