The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide

Coffee Date

A spoonful of substance—
that’s all I’m looking for. 
Stir it in while it’s hot. 
Let it dissolve and
rest until it’s tepid. 
Saccharine black?
Drink up. Dry. 

Granules cluster the bottom of the mug
and bitterness lingers on my tongue.

I’ve fooled myself again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Mcconnell Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 12:33 PM
Lovely penning Kathleen, glad you are a fan of coffee, I'm a Americano can myself! Take care, Gordon
Ball Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 12:40 PM
Hi Kathleen. I never was a coffee drinker because it's so bitter but many love it. I agree saccharine is also quite bitter instead of sweet. Very nice job here. God Bless and thanks for dropping by my page. Great to meet you. JB
Wolf Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 3:59 PM
Love this ultra-clever extended metaphor, Kathleen! As well, the final line reveals a very sharp lady, willing to take a risk... And welcome to Poetry Soup, by the way. (Better late than never, that welcome). Light and Joy, Gershon
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