Daniel Turner Poet Sonnet

Coffee Colored Memories

It's quiet whisper stirs my languid mind
Inviting coffee colored memories
A young man's face with future yet defined
Each vapored breath a page in history

Familiar apparitions reappear
Whose images I dare not chase away
The roads they traveled, washed out by my tears
This morning's chill a bridge to yesterday

Then as the welcome sun breaks o'er the trees
I find myself attended by a smile
Their goodbyes echo in the rustling leaves
As I walk back alone those last few miles

While standing on the porch I get a chill
Although the morning breeze has now grown still


               Sept 11 2016

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Dale Gregory Cozart August 7, 2017 at 10:59 AM Gorgeous. Fave.

Paul Schneiter January 23, 2017 at 10:54 AM Exquisite . . . a deeply moving, touching nostalgia piece. The line "Their goodbyes echo in the rustling leaves" is brilliant. Thank you for sharing this masterful poem, Daniel.

Charlie Smith November 7, 2016 at 7:38 PM Congratulations DT, you are becoming a regular on the podium with your sonnets. A tip of the hat. I could use some pointers...

Teddy Kimathi November 7, 2016 at 5:25 AM Congrats Daniel, for your placement with this imagery-rich piece!! ;-) Daniel Turner November 7, 2016 at 7:06 AM Thank you, Teddy.

Connie Marcum Wong November 6, 2016 at 10:49 PM I enjoyed your poem very much Daniel. Those beautiful memories become golden as we age. Congratulations on a well deserved top placement! 7 ; ) Daniel Turner November 7, 2016 at 7:05 AM Thank you Mrs Connie.

Sandra Haight November 6, 2016 at 6:47 PM Daniel, congratulations on another fine win for this emotional and very well-written Sonnet! Sandra Daniel Turner November 7, 2016 at 7:05 AM Thank you Mrs Sandra:)

Richard Lamoureux November 6, 2016 at 9:39 AM You had me at the title. Pour me a cup. Congrats on a fine win. Daniel Turner November 6, 2016 at 4:44 PM Thank you, Richard. The coffee pot is always on:)

Nette Onclaud November 6, 2016 at 9:38 AM our sonneteer lights up again!...best congrats on your fine spot, daniel.. huggs Daniel Turner November 6, 2016 at 4:43 PM Thank you, nette. I appreciate your kind comments:)

John Lawless November 6, 2016 at 8:22 AM Magnificence and metaphor in a Sonnet. Excellent job Daniel. I lingered on this to read a slower second time. Daniel Turner November 6, 2016 at 4:43 PM Thank you John. You are very kind. I appreciate your support.

Elaine George November 5, 2016 at 7:38 PM Beautiful sonnet, Daniel. Many congrats on your win. Daniel Turner November 6, 2016 at 4:42 PM Thank you, Mrs Elaine. I appreciate your kindness:)

Janice Canerdy November 5, 2016 at 6:07 PM Daniel, Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thanks for entering! Janice Daniel Turner November 6, 2016 at 4:42 PM Thank you Janice for my placement. It was a pleasure to participate.

Sharon Gulley October 25, 2016 at 9:48 AM Thank you for sharing this wonderful memory Daniel. It touched me so. I moved back home for those very same reasons. I guess we learn to love what hurts us most in the most peculiar ways. I love coffee too in the brisk mornings. Sharon A (7) for me and another Fav. Daniel Turner October 25, 2016 at 10:16 AM Thank you, Sharon. This poem is special to me. I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

Paloma P October 10, 2016 at 5:58 AM Sipping my own coffee whilst reading this, you've warmed my poetic heart even with that morning chill. Daniel Turner October 10, 2016 at 7:51 AM Thank you, Paloma. You're very sweet. I appreciate the kind comments and glad you liked the poem:)

Elissa Quigley September 16, 2016 at 10:29 AM An amazing write. The title itself had me captivated and interested. Daniel Turner September 16, 2016 at 12:48 PM Thank you, Elissa. I'm so glad you dropped by to read and that you liked my little poem. Thank you for leaving your smile:)

Sandra Haight September 16, 2016 at 7:25 AM Daniel, I love your 'coffee colored memories'...such an emotional and very well-written Sonnet. I agree with so many of the comments already offered, that your write is amazing, and it will be saved as one of my 'faves' too! Sandra Daniel Turner September 16, 2016 at 7:46 AM Thank you Mrs Sandra. I am so glad you liked:) I really appreciate your time and value your opinion. Be well:):)

Eve Roper September 13, 2016 at 6:18 PM very good, Daniel, Andrea is right.... Daniel Turner September 13, 2016 at 6:42 PM Thank you Mrs Eve. I am so glad you dropped by to read:) I really appreciate your kindness.

Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2016 at 3:16 PM Oh I see Connie Faved it too. She has good taste in quality sonnets.

Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2016 at 3:16 PM Daniel , I do not often see sonnets here that are not only well metered, but they also use great words! I mean, this is a very intelligently written sonnet and it deserves a FAVE. Daniel Turner September 13, 2016 at 3:52 PM Thank you Andrea. Such high praise from one so accomplished is very flattering:) I appreciate your kindness and encouraging remarks. It's always nice to share a smile with friends:)

Connie Marcum Wong September 13, 2016 at 3:08 AM When a poem moves me with such emotions I want to revisit it, it goes into my faves. This is so touching and memorable Danny. I love it! ; ) 7 Daniel Turner September 13, 2016 at 6:48 AM Thank you, Mrs Connie. I am honored! I appreciate your encouraging comments and it's always a pleasure Mrs Connie. I'm so glad you love it.

Carole Duet September 12, 2016 at 8:43 PM How lovely!! Yes, me too...just love the first little Autumn chill. My mother did too...so many sweet memories. So, I can easily relate to this poem. Daniel Turner September 12, 2016 at 9:28 PM Thank you Carole. You're such a dear. I appreciate your time and your kindness. I can't wait until every morning is around 50 degrees. I feel some poetry comin' on:)

Kathleen Kroll September 12, 2016 at 4:23 PM Saying good-bye to family is often such a bitter-sweet moment. This is what it evokes for me...Thank you for reminding me of the blessings contained in such moments... Kathy Daniel Turner September 12, 2016 at 5:20 PM Thank you, Kathleen. I still have my bad memories but the longer I live, the fewer I have. So glad you dropped in. Always nice to share a smile.

Maurice Rigoler September 12, 2016 at 11:16 AM Enjoyed your sonnet and the memories it evoked. My morning cup of coffee is often the catalyst for a new poem which I jot down on a napkin at my favorite coffee shop. Thank you for reading me. Best to you. / M Daniel Turner September 12, 2016 at 12:22 PM Thank you Maurice. I do enjoy coffee regularly and I too find it stimulating. I appreciate your kindness, sir.

Tracey Pollack September 12, 2016 at 9:15 AM Really enjoyed reading this poem this morning as I drank my cups of memories lol It also make me wish for cooler weather. Hot coffee and 83?f as of 9 o'clock just ain't gettin for me Daniel Turner September 12, 2016 at 10:13 AM Thank you so much for dropping by, Tracey. I drink coffee all day every day:) And yes today is another hot one here, also. Hopefully not much longer. But I still enjoy the early morning peace. I appreciate your kindness and always look forward to your friendly visits.

Phillip Garcia September 12, 2016 at 3:22 AM This I think is my new favorite of yours (but it's 3am so I won't make any official declarations as I might be punch-drunk) it's perfect in sentiment and rhythm and concise all the way around. I also feel inclined to piggy-back on Tim's comment and say of course the Bears didn't win. The Texans are legit this year; Reco'nize! Daniel Turner September 12, 2016 at 7:18 AM Thank you, Phillip. I appreciate your kind comments and I think you may be a little "punch drunk" One game does not make a season;) Now them Hogs (Razorbacks) they are legit!!

Sarban Bhattacharya September 11, 2016 at 11:56 PM A wonderful journey down the memory lane, Daniel. Daniel Turner September 12, 2016 at 7:15 AM Thank you Sarban. it's so thoughtful of you to stop by for a visit. I appreciate your kindness and your support.

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