Cocoon

Cocoon

I found a moth cocoon of silken thread
--A substance indestructable they say--
Almost unseen–his earthbrown, narrow bed
Where, patiently, the silent captive lay.
I thought to put him in a jar, to own,
To watch, to cherish his emerging form, 
But No! The case was broken, he had flown!
His empty, useless house no longer warm,
He flew in joy beneath the spring-blue sky,
Caressing gardens with his sun-bright wings.
He seemed to relish living--sailing high
And in the April breezes fluttering.
I crushed his empty shell between my hands 
And hoped he safely flew to other lands.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/17/2014 5:23:00 PM
Good poem! Did the cocoon stand for something else? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Karen Ruff
Date: 2/18/2014 6:21:00 AM
Thanks. I guess you can let your imagination do whatever. One thing I like about poetry is that the economy of language allows one person to write out of experieince or observation--his or someone else's--and yet the reader is free to see whatever the language might imply.
Date: 1/21/2014 11:14:00 PM
So enjoyed this sonnet... Today it was -35 Celsius here. Your lines warmed me :) I liked line 11 relish living... and the early volta! NICE! I have no idea why, but I want to play with your 12th line so that it ends with flutterings -- which is not an ACTUAL word, yet seems to fit the innocent exuberance of this piece. Hope you are enjoying the soup. : ) Smiles from Cyndi
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Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 1/21/2014 11:19:00 PM
OH< <<< I NOW KNOW... silly silly silly me. I am thinking about PREGNANCY. The first fluttering(s). The movement of the baby!
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Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 1/21/2014 11:17:00 PM
Hmmm... like.... in April's breezes, those first flutterings. I'm off to bed now, smiling... we have a butterfly sanctuary not that far away, and there are many moths there as well. You reminded me of my last visit there...
Date: 1/21/2014 10:08:00 PM
Enjoyed this...an unusual topic and I like that. BG
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Date: 1/21/2014 9:43:00 PM
Very well written Karen.. Longing a spring day. Tim
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