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October-17-2023
Coconut Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Robert James Liguori

 

On sandy beaches and along fertile riverbanks, In fecund soil and in lush green plantations, Coconut trees stand tall towering into the sky. They are benevolent palms at the service of generations. A coconut tree is a marvel of creation, every part of it can be used. Its umbrella like crown of leaves shades us from sun. Its circular, heavy cluster of fruits enrich our bodies. From coconut husks, coir mats and ropes are spun. The milk-white kernel inside the coconut shell, Is used in curries, cookies and for extracting oil. The water inside is a healthy, delicious drink. Its vast net work of labyrinthine roots holds the loose soil. Its sturdy trunk is used as a support for anchoring small boats. Coconut shells in the hands of a craftsman turn into attractive curios. Palm fronds are used for thatching small hovels and sheds. Thus, from foot to crown, its uses and charms are various. If one is stressed, it is therapeutic to de-husk a coconut. It is a fine exercise and an ideal way to de-stress. If angry with some one and wish to tear him limb by limb, Break a coconut and it will take away all your noxious distress. Still if you don’t feel comfortable and are with tingling nerves, Scrape a coconut bit by bit and by the time you finish, All your anger must have slowly gone as steam into air, And in course of time, you will see it thoroughly vanish!

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Date: 10/18/2023 9:26:00 PM
Back to say CONGRATS on your win!!!
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Date: 10/18/2023 4:11:00 PM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved contest win, Valsa.
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Date: 10/18/2023 12:43:00 PM
I love the way you describe this versatile drupe dear Valsa. Useful as a way to reduce stress - genius! I really love it! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 10/18/2023 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. I Love your line, "A coconut tree is a marvel of creation, every part of it can be used." So very true. I love eating coconuts. Have a great day writing away....................
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Date: 10/18/2023 6:17:00 AM
So much can be done with a coconut tree, and it's so good to be told in this way. Thanks, Valsa.
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Date: 10/18/2023 3:39:00 AM
Pity coconut is not my favorite fruit but I love coconut palms. They are so elegant. I learned a lot from your lovely poem. Blessings.
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Date: 10/17/2023 11:21:00 PM
“If angry with some one and wish to tear him limb by limb, Break a coconut and it will take away all your noxious distress.” Haha! Such a clever line ill do that next time! Ah wow beautiful soul! You’ve used a picture of maldives, and i love the way youv highlighted various aspects of coconut and their use in our daily lives, you really know what you are writing about, as yes usually i do drink coconut water too when i feel dehydrated! What a profound write this is! Something about coconut tree
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Date: 10/17/2023 11:23:00 PM
Is always calming for me and is like a beautiful decoration to island life! I get sad when i see coconut trees cut down. Your poem would be an enlightening one for so many readers, and the flow of your creative lines is truly impeccable! You are so gifted! I wanted to write for coconuts but I guess its already closed! Goodluck for the contest
Date: 10/17/2023 6:30:00 PM
i did n't know all that stuff about cocout, it is some magical fruit indeed, you made me remember a week at Rio, where i drink coconut juice on Copacabana , coconut made so many people dream, thanks Valsa, for the marvellous poem
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Date: 10/17/2023 3:20:00 PM
Your poem was both informative and creative, Ms. Valsa. I learned a great deal about coconuts while reading your poem. The rhyme scheme was outstanding...amazing how you can do that and still say what you want to say. You're gifted. Have a great evening, Sara
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Valsa George
Date: 10/17/2023 8:17:00 PM
Sara, I am a resident of Kerala, a small state in India. In our state, coconut trees are in plenty. We make use of every part of it. Here it is called 'Kalpavriksha'... the tree of life! Since you seem to be interested, I thought of giving this additional information. Thank you so much for your most encouraging words.
Date: 10/17/2023 9:37:00 AM
Wow, dear poetess, you surely inspire my heart everytime with your profound and breathtaking poems.. So amazingly you've described the difference dimensions of coconuts, where they are utilised and prove advantageous..A very informative poem as well, this is! Your wordplay is so captivating throughout and especially I love the lines "The milk-white kernel inside the coconut shell", "Its vast net work of labyrinthine roots holds the loose soil" The ending stanzas as well.. So wonderful! Love this
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Date: 10/17/2023 5:53:00 AM
Wow Ms. Vals, I had no idea how versatile the coconut is. Thanks so much for educating me. Best of luck in your contest. It's so well done. Enjoyed.
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Date: 10/17/2023 5:43:00 AM
Superbly described, Valsa, you have covered all the aspects:)
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Date: 10/17/2023 5:09:00 AM
Dear Valsa, your exquisite poem captivates me once again, effortlessly delving into a myriad of thought-provoking themes. Your masterful utilization of vibrant imagery and carefully chosen words elevates your work to unparalleled heights. And the delightful inclusion of the multifaceted coconut in our everyday existence, adds a delectable layer of richness to your composition. Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 10/17/2023 3:27:00 AM
greatly written the coconuts poetry; wish a brilliant success in the contest
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Date: 10/17/2023 12:26:00 AM
Valsa this is a great entry for the contest. I like that you have shared all the uses of the coconut in your rhyme. Best wishes for a win!
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