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Coconuts

Coconuts falling large and whole On my way to gather like gold Calling my name as I love them so Only to tame adult drink so cold Needing the hull to make a bra Understanding I am a bronze star Tropical queen who sings in bar Sing with me, have fun dear heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/26/2023 8:12:00 PM
I always thought this was a fun word to say. Your fifth line's imagery made me chuckle. Cute one. I love coconut and your poem Karen :)
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/26/2023 8:55:00 PM
Glad you giggled. Thanks for reading Marikate.
Date: 10/15/2023 8:06:00 AM
Different, cute snd happy. A lovely acrostic.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/15/2023 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Hilda!
Date: 10/10/2023 9:50:00 PM
An uplifting fun Acrostic poem, my friend. I like it! Bill
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/10/2023 10:41:00 PM
Thanks again Bill! Hugs :0)
Date: 10/10/2023 12:53:00 AM
A fun poem. Well done.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/10/2023 1:02:00 AM
Thanks Jeanette!
Date: 10/9/2023 7:24:00 PM
Like the casual cool, with a hint of edginess. ~ Ko Ko Mo
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/9/2023 7:35:00 PM
Hugs for reading Gershon.
Date: 10/8/2023 8:37:00 PM
So creative and descriptive, Karen! Janice
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/8/2023 8:42:00 PM
Thanks Janice!
Date: 10/8/2023 3:16:00 PM
Fun one Karen - well done
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/8/2023 3:19:00 PM
Thanks dear!

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