Coconuts

Coconuts falling large and whole
On my way to gather like gold
Calling my name as I love them so
Only to tame adult drink so cold
Needing the hull to make a bra
Understanding I am a bronze star
Tropical queen who sings in bar
Sing with me, have fun dear heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 8:12 PM
I always thought this was a fun word to say. Your fifth line's imagery made me chuckle. Cute one. I love coconut and your poem Karen :)
Jones Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 8:55 PM
Glad you giggled. Thanks for reading Marikate.
Greenhough Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:06 AM
Different, cute snd happy. A lovely acrostic.
Jones Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:55 AM
Thanks Hilda!
Baker Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 9:50 PM
An uplifting fun Acrostic poem, my friend. I like it! Bill
Jones Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 10:41 PM
Thanks again Bill! Hugs :0)
Meadows Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 12:53 AM
A fun poem. Well done.
Jones Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 1:02 AM
Thanks Jeanette!
Wolf Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 7:24 PM
Like the casual cool, with a hint of edginess. ~ Ko Ko Mo
Jones Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 7:35 PM
Hugs for reading Gershon.
Canerdy Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 8:37 PM
So creative and descriptive, Karen! Janice
Jones Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 8:42 PM
Thanks Janice!
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