Coconut Shell - 5th Place

A coconut shell, so fair and so bright 
More when it is lit by the shining light 
For without it's dark cover 
It looks like tawny clover 
With glistening glimmer that blurs the sight

5th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 10:53 AM
I like the alliteration in the last line Roger. Clever! Congratulations! :)
Roger  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 3:26 PM
Thank you very much...
Kitchin Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 1:29 PM
Roger, congratulations on your winning placement!
Roger  Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 8:18 PM
Thank you very much...
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