Coconut

It answered to my thirst from the top

When I watered a coconut palm root

My hands stroked his head's top

He kicked me in force with his foot!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Babcock Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 12:04 PM
Love the humor to your poems. love phyl
Thajudeen Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 3:40 AM
Thank you dear poet Babcock.
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 1:01 AM
Lol... Very funny poem, my friend! It made me smile.The coconuts head kicked you in force with its foot. So silly and funny, Muhammad. Hahahaaa. I love it! :) Take care! xxxx D.
Thajudeen Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 5:48 AM
Thank you for visiting and sitting.
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