Coconut

Nature teases man with its creations,
gifts that astound us and make us marvel,
a coconut is perhaps a fruit with a soul,
the exterior that harbours purity inside.
high above the ground out of hand’s reach,
in families they stay and drop one by one,
a fruit so heavy it can crack a skull, 
Thank God! for Newton, it was apple
and not a coconut that fell.
Every bit of it serves a purpose!
in natures plan, nothing is left to waste,
the fluffy layers help it sail across oceans,
to create a new life beyond horizons.
The hard shell preserves the fruit inside,
bathed in the sweetest of nourishing juices,
it has eyes to let the germination roots out,
who could have designed such a nutshell?
in human language a coconut is a racial slur,
describes people who pretend to be what
they are not! Philosophers have a different view!
They say a coconut is a divine fruit!
We should strive and be like a coconut,
for when we peel away our fluffy ego
and crack open the shell of our false pride,
the white purity of our soul emerges!
Life’s journey is so much alike!
Where and how we journey and where we reach
depends on the waves and currents of fate,
but lead a life where every bit of you serves
a purpose, so when the final true self
emerges, it is bathed in sweetness of
wisdom that may nourish many other souls!

Written 14th October 2023
Free verse
Coconuts Poetry competition
Robert James Liguori sponsored
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 2:58 PM
Your "Coconut" is a wonderful write. I love coconuts/a wonderful fruit. I like how you did it with a journey/a wonderful way to end it. Good Luck... I also did this one. Have a blessed weekend..........
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 7:48 AM
"Life’s journey is so much alike! Where and how we journey and where we reach depends on the waves and currents of fate," how profound and deep your lines are, Dear Krish! This line only make me ponder so much from my life, and fate! To my FAVES.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 10:54 AM
Do not worry about writing a review soon about the translations. Although I am looking forward to, it can wait. You already had commented on those poems...I am ecstatic, you are reading them again. I truly appreciate your support and kindness.
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 11:41 AM
Dear Mala Lovely to hear from you! Pleased you like it and can understand my view point. I am reading your beautiful translation and shall do a review hopefully soon.
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