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I know a dolphin named Coco, she lives at Aqua World theme park; on most days she puts on a show, leaping high and dancing on mark. And chattering, and squeaking; for kids and for adult tourists, her trainer- she totally trusts. Coco is good at retrieving, something thrown and she leaps; just like a dog with no bark, she swims a bullet in the deeps. Once jumping happy with a trophy; in her mouth- a human finger, was given a fish for the honor. Of course, the FBI was called, with Coco's help they found the rest; a bit here, there- don't be appalled, all Coco wanted was praise professed. She was famous, people took notice; Coco and other dolphins trained, to find- and their joy never waned. ___________________________ December 28, 2017 Poetry/Rhyme/Coco. the Hero Copyright Protected, ID 17-9973-40-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Dolphins sponsor, Julie Leigh Rodeheaver Third Place

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Date: 3/4/2018 10:30:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win .. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:55:00 AM
A most pleasant yet disturbing read. Very well written. Congrats on your winning poem, BW.
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Date: 3/3/2018 1:30:00 AM
Congratulations B.W. Tom
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:06:00 AM
Tom, thank you for the congratulations ~
Date: 12/31/2017 4:11:00 PM
Nice one Constance, dolphins are wonderful creatures, showing good rhyme and flow. Trust things OK with you,have blessed 2018, blessings Gordon
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Date: 3/3/2018 9:07:00 AM
Gordon, thank you for the compliment and comment ~
Date: 12/30/2017 10:27:00 PM
This is awesome , Broken Wings, :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:07:00 AM
Eve, thank you for the awesome and the hugs ~
Date: 12/28/2017 8:39:00 PM
Great words and descriptions in your poem here. Good luck in the contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:08:00 AM
James, thank you for the visit and the compliment ~
Date: 12/28/2017 11:19:00 AM
Heart-stopping write! Taming the wild is not a complacent sport!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/3/2018 9:09:00 AM
Kim, thank you for visiting and for the compliment ~

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