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When I first published this poem. I a male focused just on the cock and the poem consisted in its entirety of only the first eight lines. After receiving  a comment from a hen, I revised the poem and added the last three lines.  sincerely typical male

young chicks become old hens young cocks become old dreamers remembering cock-a-doodle-doo cock-a-doodle-doo while the hens cluck in their sweat dreams

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Date: 11/23/2015 8:18:00 PM
Lmfao old hens dream too I know that for a fact
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