Cock-A-Doodle-Doo
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When I first published this poem. I a male focused just on the cock and the poem consisted in its entirety of only the first eight lines. After receiving a comment from a hen, I revised the poem and added the last three lines. sincerely typical male
young chicks
become
old hens
young cocks
become
old dreamers
remembering
cock-a-doodle-doo
cock-a-doodle-doo
while the hens cluck
in their sweet dreams
Copyright © Rudolph Rinaldi | Year Posted 2015
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