Coccinella Magnifica

A mystery to some, but not to me,
why one would call thee, "Lady"
Other beetles could be called fair,
some would even argue scholarly

But gentlemanly?

Now that's a stretch
if I ever heard one
Have you ever seen a bloke worth his salt
sporting a polka-dot dress?

(...probably best
to just let the question lie...)

But don't take my advice,
tiny traveler, antenna-clad
Hop aboard this here fingertip
if adventures be your wish

(and boredom be your curse)

It's sure to be a bumpy ride,
but you'll have a smile a mile wide
(for me quite literally)
Just hang on tight and I cross my heart
I won't let you hurt...

...on this skyscraper of a vehicle
you traverse

I'll show you the greener grass
and the fairer fields
You can show me the tiny wonders
of your micro-plains, your myriad kind

(take a breath on this here forget-me-not
I'm sure you won't mind)

For it's just a quick stop
and all at once - we're back again -
to wonders many
and thousand mile 'n' hour winds

(is your seat-belt strapped in?
because we're gonna go fast)

Past the neighborhood block
and maybe the next neighborhood too
(but the moment we reach the county line,
that's when we'll have to think things through)

Reassess
Take it in

Not all of life takes place
on a giant's back (however well meaning)
Sometimes we have to make our own movements,
even it's meager

            (even if it's fleeting)

My six legged ruby
from fingerbridge
   to fingerbridge

I don't know if I was your beginning
or your middle,
but in either case
you'll have to finish

...your steps not mine
(I swear it will be divine)
Not an easy trip,
but it'll be worth it
and you'll be a better ladybird
for it

(if you had pinkies
   I'd make a promise,
but you'll just have to take
      my word for it)

You can't stay forever, little one,
any second you must depart--
to open air and summer sound,
to aqua skies      (and smaller friends)

Find a home, oh precious gem,
far away from this earthquake ground
For we both knew this moment would come
when you took that first freckled-step
to my welcoming nail;
our curious outfit was destined to fail,
not with pomp and fanfare
   or trumpets of exuberance,
but with the whisper of wings

(see that crimson jewel
becoming one with the blue?
how it sings)

It's gonna hurt like a gram of bricks
(but not too quick, toothpick,
let me let you in on a little secret)

we'll cross that knuckle
when we come to it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 9:09 PM
Delightful poem, Timothy ~ wrapped up perfectly with "we'll cross that knuckle when we come to it"
Hicks Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 10:23 PM
Thanks Line. I'm quite proud of this quirky poem ... not sure where it came from (but then again I never know where ANY of the poems come from .. they just seem to fall out of sky ... we wonder why).
Callus Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 3:12 PM
I can relate to such a lovely relationship with a ladybird (and many other small creatures), Timothy, but never translated it into a delightful poem such as this one. Coccinella is a good listener...I wonder what she told you before you had to part! ~ Regards // paul
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:56 PM
... between her and I ;) Thanks for your kind words, always, Paul.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 11:08 AM
I was enthralled all the way through this adventure of the lady bug and you. You are such an entertaining poet. I stand in great admiration Timothy. xxoo
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:55 PM
Thanks for being a wonderful fan, Connie ... I am glad you were entertained!
One Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 12:02 PM
I'm glad you have a special beetle in your life...
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:54 PM
Thanks Silent.... it's those ephemeral moments that are special.
Theraven Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 11:27 PM
Timothy, 'It's gonna hurt like a gram of bricks' weighs so heavy on my mind. The poet's frolicking insect, lithe, lighthearted, and so well defined. -Richard
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:54 PM
I appreciate your extremely thoughtful comment, Raven. I was a particular fan of that line myself.
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 9:40 PM
haha, is that poor bug gonna die perhaps when she meets the rush of wind and jumps off your hand? You are such a delight!
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:53 PM
Hopefully not ... may she live a long life long afterwards! (depending on how long ladybugs live anyway ... lol). Thanks!
Delaney Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 2:34 PM
What a story teller you are, Tim....and what a trip. I didn’t want it to end. I often rescue bugs that ride a flower bunch inside. I’ll always think of your poem when I see a ladybug now. Ever the kind giant to the insect world, you are - and always a delight to read. Hugs, SuZ
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:52 PM
Thanks Suz. You have such a special affinity for the natural world so I figured you would like this one.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 12:46 PM
Oh, the build up! You had me howling right on cue! Love it. xomo
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:52 PM
Thank .. "Pigeon Tart" .. INNNnnteresting.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 8:14 AM
Delightful, perspective makes all the difference. I have been scouring nurseries to find Lady Bugs. Sadly there are none to be found. They love aphids and I wanted them to come to my house for a buffet.
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:51 PM
They are very helpful creatures (not just adorable!). Thanks for the stop as always!
Pandit Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 7:29 AM
Kudos for this creative write, Tim--enjoyed the journey through your imagination ..with the polka-dot lady. A splendid poem you wrote!
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:51 PM
Thanks again for your committed support, my friend!
Cunningham Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 5:54 AM
Loved your journey in to that microscopic world, had to Google coccinella, I thought you were referring to ladybirds. Got me thinking about honey I shrunk the kids. What an amazing experience that would be. Tom
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:50 PM
Normally, I don't go for "too weird" of titles ... but in my research on ladybugs I found that was the scientific term for it and I liked the sound of it. Thanks for your creative comment.
Deo Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 3:34 AM
or 7-spot ladybird (rare). great tribute, Nature Saint
Deo Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 3:32 AM
could be a special poem for a ladybug! shalom indeed! anil
Hicks Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:48 PM
You interpreted this correctly ... thank you!
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