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Cobwebs

Cobwebs I climb the creaky stairs into the attic And survey the clutter through a filtered light That peeks dimly through the grimy window Settling on the cobwebs that abound I see a chest that I had long forgotten I kneel, lift it's lid, and look inside Maternity clothes stored in anticipation Of expectations that were never met I open up a dusty old container Revealing records that we used to play Performed by names now a part of history Songs, much like their makers, cast aside Albums stacked on albums sit together Black and white memories stored inside Pictures wrapped in books of cracking leather Attesting to the world of yesterday On a nail a uniform is hanging The glint of tarnished brass on the lapels A tribute to a time our country beckoned And our youth went off to join another war I look around and view all of my treasures Of little value but perhaps to me All the stories to be recollected A storehouse of the world of used to be Slowly I retreat back down the stairway And savor the nostalgia of the past But a piece of me remains up in the attic Where time is frozen and captured years still dwell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/28/2011 1:43:00 PM
A very humanistic tale of hope, and sorrow, through the passage of time. The orb weaver always makes a new start; spin something new, and catch a fresh tomorrow. Take care and be well
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/28/2011 1:56:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Edwin. Appreciate your comments.
Date: 8/19/2011 1:55:00 PM
sentimental as the words sprawling in the lanes of remembrances, bob... enticed! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:55:00 AM
I am currently constructing a mock up of an attic at church. The idea is that the little kids will visit God's attic and see what he keeps there. Swords, Joseph's coat of many colors, planets.... Anyway, when I proposed the idea I was thinking of the attic of the house where I grew up. It's where I went to be alone. Big family. Just thinking about it made me nostalgic. Thanks for the poem. Tony
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/19/2011 12:20:00 PM
Tony. What a wonderful idea about Gods attic. I need to tell my brother, a retired minister. Sure he will love the idea also. Good luck in pulling it together. And thank you for the kind words.
Date: 8/19/2011 11:54:00 AM
Lovely write!!!!. Enjoyed reading your poem---Lori
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/19/2011 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Lori. Much appreciated
Date: 8/19/2011 11:13:00 AM
yes the cobwebs cannot replace the memories that live in storage places Bob.. lovely reminisce in these lines luv..
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Bob Quigley
Date: 8/19/2011 12:22:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words and support

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