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Cobra Kite

A kite cobra hisses on high sky. To flight or to fight -In such height - The gusty wind, the hot daylight, Snake charmer below, quite right, Birds that fly mimicking with delight Or to freely, with arms open, try, While flirting rosy clouds, to fly -In blue sky- And gleefully cry With no sigh Are What he can try. He does fly Terribly High, So He chooses to fly -In blue sky- With delight, To the tune Of kite charmer who pulls the long, tiny end of his tail .. .
Sept. 9, 2020 COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (6)any form any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 9/10/2020 11:50:00 AM
So beautifully done, and I think this also qualifies as a shape poem, as I immediately saw a cobra when I turned to this page.
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Date: 9/10/2020 12:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren, for this wonderfully great comment!!
Date: 9/10/2020 3:36:00 AM
- An excellent poem, Newton :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/10/2020 4:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise!!
Date: 9/9/2020 8:40:00 PM
Nice tug-of-war you're pictured here, Newton. Good luck in Brian's contest. Flight and Freedom, Gershon
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/9/2020 9:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon, for this wonderfully great read and the comment!!

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