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Cobra

a hooded snake looks me eye to eye, death just two feet away, he sways his head with a warning hiss, “keep still or you have had your stay!” he coils his body with a slither, God had made him that way! in a conflict of souls he will win, I should stay still if I am to see another day! he edges his way towards the door, still watching me eye to eye, he seeks an opening with a final hiss, then quickly slithers away!! In that brief encounter of man and snake, he won the battle that day, in combat would have killed me straight, but he taught me a lesson in a way, he chose not to hurt me though he could, a moral that with me would stay, He showed more compassion to a man, than most men would have done that day! Premium contest winner (3) Written 16/March/2021 Contemplation poetry contest Craig Cornish sponsored!

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Date: 3/29/2021 9:22:00 AM
Krish, your wonderfully worded story poem was chilling and mesmerizing all at the same time! You very successfully wrote about "contemplation" from both sides of the equation - you and the snake and then built tension to released at your conclusion with its innate wisdom. Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/29/2021 12:43:00 PM
Thanks Sam! My youth was spent at a place where we were often surprised by snakes. they always wanted to get away, never attack us!
Date: 3/15/2021 1:10:00 PM
oh, a very thrilling write here
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/15/2021 11:44:00 PM
thanks Jack. a real experience for some!
Date: 3/14/2021 4:16:00 PM
wow, that is very interesting to think about, Krish. I really enjoyed this one.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/15/2021 11:33:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Nothing more scary than a hooded Cobra looking at you!

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