cobblestone

the stones are smooth from years of wear
but not the jostle to cross the square

written June 16, 25 for Nette Onclaud's Crystalline Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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mysore Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 7:06 AM
unique. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
Woods Avatar
June 17, 2025 at 10:20 AM
Awe perfection! The twist at the end was difficult for me to achieve but you've done it nicely! Now this one is my fav so far lol! Xo
Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2025 at 6:29 AM
Well done Craig, a nice win.
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