Cobbler -Hlm

sits in one corner with glue, thumb-tacks and hammer savior of lost soles Mr. Smith accepts any kind of old shoes To fix, sew and make tight ones loose Also makes loose ones tight Swapping your left and right At lowest cost, trims your nails and toes Old shoe’s life lies over the heels of a cobbler, controller of some avid shoppers. Jan 22, 2022 11.49am Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku Contest Judged: 3/11/2022 3:42:00 AM Sponsored by: Charles Messina Place 2

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Charles Messina

Date: 3/16/2022 7:17:00 PM

Hey Len, sorry it took so long to comment on this fun write. You did well on connecting these forms together. Good ole Mr. Smith! Belated Congrats on your win in my contest. All the best, Charlie

Len Gasun
Date: 3/16/2022 7:29:00 PM

No problem sir. thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest. God bless you sir Charlie. Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/13/2022 4:22:00 AM

I have read your winning work and was delighted that it is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Len Gasun
Date: 3/16/2022 7:30:00 PM

Thank you so much for your congratulatory comments and for dropping my dear friend Sara.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/11/2022 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Yes, a true cobbler can make old shoes like new. Have a blessed day.................

Len Gasun
Date: 3/16/2022 7:32:00 PM

You're right my dear friend. Cobbler can save my favourite shoes. Thank you very much once again my dear friend. Have a blessed day too. Hugs to you.

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/11/2022 7:52:00 AM

Len, I love Mr. Smith. Very nice and congratulations!

Len Gasun
Date: 3/14/2022 8:54:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear Anaya. Your kind words arre heartily appreciated. God bless. Hugs.

Karen Croft

Date: 1/22/2022 1:39:00 AM

very nice!

Len Gasun
Date: 1/22/2022 6:23:00 PM

thank you