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Written: November 19, 2023 ________________________________________ I must plunge into the seafloor. Out into the abyss of water and starry sky. I utterly crave a lofty vessel. As waves roll ashore, And the insight of the stars from high. The wind symphony and the vortex spin Yet the pearl sail is shaking within. A murky haze veils the ocean's surface. And the onset of a dismal dawn stirs us. I must plunge into the seafloor. Owing to the beckoning of an ebbing wave, An erratic and yet obvious call before. That might not be waived. I'd settle for a breezy day. As cotton clouds glide across the sky. Sputtering fog and billowing spume And the squawking of seabirds, I presume. I must plunge into the seafloor. Onward to the wandering gypsy life. Trillions of years elapsed, and it is still pure. Where the wind acts as a sharpened knife The only thing I require is an ascetic tale. Expressed humorously by a gypsy peer. Restful sleep and lovely dreams prevail. Finished the drawn-out mystical cheer.
 

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Date: 11/20/2023 5:36:00 AM
Splendid evocation of joy amid blessings of nature, my friend. I feel the exhilaration exuding through your lines. Imagery enhances the cheer of your thoughts.
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Date: 11/20/2023 4:09:00 AM
Well, don't dive too deep into the great ocean or sea unless it is only in your dreams. Thank you for sharing this creative work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 11/19/2023 7:03:00 PM
This deep and interesting poem enchants me.
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Date: 11/19/2023 5:51:00 PM
Wow, what a haunting work, it's ethereal. I loved your repetition of going down to the sea.
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