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Coastal Pain Minor Redone

The acrid smell is gone replaced by seaweed and salt The crows have returned in the early mornings Cawing and butting walnuts on the roof Neighbors hide their cats — for quiet coyotes are hungry Orphaned baby mountain lions are cuddled in rescue wraps Horses put down, wildlife gone, Eyes keep alert looking at the skies, the hills, Beloved parks with pines, their tart scent of eucalyptus The soft smell of lavender, the sweetness of sage-scarred Still memories of burning nights snd falling ash remains To stay or where to go, fires and floods There are small pockets of flame hidden in the mountains The skies now are blue the white fog has returned Some days the smell of burnt smoking wood remains, For the quiet land is damaged and feels a burning pain

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Date: 1/2/2021 4:15:00 AM
You have such a terrific way with words Linda. "Neighbors hide their cats — for quiet coyotes are hungry" I am laughing now. It is SO true! And when they surround something, my hair stands on end when I hear the happy yipping.
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Date: 10/19/2020 6:52:00 AM
Great images and emotions abound in this poem. Difficult for me for we don't have such scenes especially the perfumes in Malta. ~~
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Linda Milgate
Date: 10/19/2020 8:52:00 PM
Really good not to have this in your lands, has been a shock. so much animal deaths and a few people. Writing helps doesn't it. thank you for your thoughts. You are in Malta seems like a beautiful place islands in the Mediterranean? So nice to connect with people from all over the world. have enjoyed your poetry.
Date: 10/18/2020 6:24:00 AM
oh wow, the emotions in this with such a great use of metaphor....
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Linda Milgate
Date: 10/18/2020 3:49:00 PM
thank you not hard to describe this and so many damaged by these fires. helps to describe it -- poetry can be therapy.

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