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an old owl shudders a cacophony of geese - wildly breaking wind 5/7/2020 An Haiku with motions

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Date: 5/10/2020 2:27:00 AM
Fantastic Haiku, John, congratulations. Eve
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Date: 5/9/2020 9:51:00 PM
I am loving the winners on this list and yours is no exception. BIG congrats, John
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Date: 5/9/2020 9:00:00 PM
A cacophony, indeed! Such great sensory imagery, John. Congratulations on your excellent win in Tania's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/9/2020 9:31:00 AM
LOL...great! Congratulations, John!
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Date: 5/9/2020 5:57:00 AM
John, congratulations on your winning placement. I enjoyed this, interesting and unique imagery!
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John Lawless
Date: 5/9/2020 7:30:00 AM
Thank you Tania. I have been on a quiet pond when the geese descended. They are the definition of the word cacophony.

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