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Clyde Schlunk's Epitaph

On a banana peel Clyde slipped and fell! We pray he landed in Paradise and not in Hell! Entry for Jesse Rowe's "A Funny Epitaph" Contest (13 September 2018)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2018 8:27:00 PM

wow I am reading so many good ones. I hope they ALL make the list. (thanks for what you said on my limerick)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/13/2018 11:11:00 PM

G'day Bob … I dare say wherever he goes he doesn't want any bananas there - thank you Bob - Lindsay

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/14/2018 6:56:00 PM

I would agree, Lindsay! Have a G'day - Bob

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/13/2018 4:24:00 PM

ha! very clever, bob! best of luck in the contest...

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/13/2018 6:29:00 PM

Thanks, Ilene - glad it gave you a smile. Best to you - Bob

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/13/2018 3:04:00 PM

Bravo. Adorable little write. A moment of silence for Clyde.

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/13/2018 6:30:00 PM

Thank you, Line. And indeed a moment of silence for hapless Clyde. Bob

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/13/2018 1:33:00 PM

short and sweet, hard to beat.

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/13/2018 1:49:00 PM

Thank you, Caren, for your "poetic" comment. Best to you - Bob