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Clyde O'Toole's Bad Luck

Clyde O'Toole suffered a heap of bad luck He was beaned with a wayward hockey puck He was heard to swear As it creased his hair Unfortunately Clyde forgot to duck Entry for Tania Kitchin's "Limerick Fun Poetry" Contest (PS/31 August 2020) Won No. 3 in the contest

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John Watt

Date: 9/6/2020 11:38:00 AM

Enjoyed this lim from start to finish, Bob, especially the 'crease' pun from the hockey world. Congrats on your win, my friend ~ John

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/6/2020 8:32:00 AM

Bob, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick, love the imagery!

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/6/2020 9:20:00 AM

Thank you Tania, for considering my entry in your contest worthy of a win. I look forward to participating in other contests you may sponsor. Bob

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2020 8:07:00 AM

it could have been far worse lol, great humour Bob, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/2/2020 9:21:00 PM

G’day Bob … very good Bob. At least he stopped the puck in its track. Hope he was thanked for that - thanks Bob - Lindsay

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2020 2:43:00 PM

Love it, Bob! At least Clyde didn't lose his teeth. I used to go to NY to see the Rangers play and found many of the players never "smiled." LOL Great entry for the contest! Winning wishes coming your way. Hugs, Carolyn

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/1/2020 5:05:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn. I love the lim you submitted for the contest and best wishes to you for a top win! All goes well here so far - Bob

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/1/2020 1:32:00 PM

Ouch, bet that damn hurt lol. Good luck Bob Tom

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/1/2020 5:06:00 PM

Thanks Tom - glad it gave you a laff. I suspect old Clyde has a permanent part in his hair! Best on you - Bob

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2020 2:18:00 AM

- A great and fun limerick for the contest, Bob ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/1/2020 12:02:00 PM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise - glad you enjoyed it - Bob

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/31/2020 7:12:00 PM

bob, a hilarious sketch with that kick in the end..at least clyde still has some hair!/lol/ huggs

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/31/2020 6:07:00 PM

As an avid hockey fan of the San Jose Sharks...loved this one. At games, one has to be aware of flying pucks. A super limerick, Bob. I just read it to my daughter over the telephone! Maria loved it as well. " Zamboni Pangie" xx An added laugh...the validation code for this was, no kidding..,DEM. That, plus the limerick has this poetess.... in total hysterics! Need I say more?

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/31/2020 6:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pangie. Glad it gave you and Maria a laugh. If I can bring out emotions with my concoctions, then I have done my job as a struggling writer - Bob