Clutching This Instance

If ever I had two hours with you… or three, the vacancy of this night and lulled shores would be refilled with the gushing of frosted air on our reveries past; the multitude of amiable stars bestowing a hush of surrender... raged midnights ending into fresh mornings backed by our theme song replayed. Then, to recall the sevens and nines of time cutting our names into crumpled paper: a departure of hearts traveling in different territories. We inched away, not because of lack for vows marked in deepest sands. But… by fate’s desire to shelter you in a faraway place, while I... I burned skies through the pain and beauty the long distance of regrets had claimed. If and when we unite again, two or three hours by God's grace, oh the fluttering of a thousand fearless thoughts would not be enough to say you were the branch that got away, and I was your last rose that lost its stem. Perhaps, now is the moment to clutch the moment? Regina Riddle's Seize The Day ( Carpe Diem) 10/26/2014
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Sirak Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Nette, I see this is another winner! Your phrasing always leaves me stunned. "Your last rose that lost its stem", amazing thoughts.
Kendrick Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 4:52 AM
Congrats,.,Sara
Mehta Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 5:00 AM
A moving piece, congrats on the win, nette
Johnson Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 10:23 PM
Yes now is always the best time to grasp the moment. Congratulations on a great poem. Love, Joyce
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 7:13 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 3:45 AM
This is still one of my favorites for this challenge nette. I faved it. Love your quil on this write. Congratulations on your win.
Enriquez Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 6:31 AM
Dear Nette: Lovely. Simply lovely. Hope you're enjoying your trip to the Holy Land. All the best then, Leon.
Yvonne Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 3:17 AM
I find it amazing how many diferent versions of seize the day poets are writting. This is one of the best I have read.
Hamilton Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 7:44 PM
so moving Nette a masterly pen that sings hugs
Ryerson Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 8:09 PM
Super-duper-Soupy-Soup-Mail...
Ryerson Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 7:55 PM
Yep, Scribe nailed it there but might I add: 'I burned skies through the pain and beauty the long distance of regrets had claimed' Oh mercy me...
A. Sharma Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 8:57 AM
Vows marked in deepest sands ,, wow Nette! Wonderful write my friend! Gl in contest! Loved the final two lines much,, I was ur last rose that lost its stem!!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 3:19 PM
So very beautiful. Now is always the time Netta
Smith Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 2:30 PM
Yes nette...now is the time...don't let this opportunity slip by...hugs Tim
Bordner Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 1:42 PM
Fate has a kiss for every bliss, love knows feelings immortal in intensity, moments are opportunities to live Nette. Your poetry stimulates my heart, thank you. J.A.B.
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 1:36 PM
Beautifully penned Nette outstanding imagery - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
Fowling Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 1:13 PM
Thats so beautifull dude.
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