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Cloudy Reasons

Dark though inside stars can keep you warm But like arias— never stepping chase This solo softens when distance far For blacking out slowly— memory's sake. I see you so beautiful in gray. And I'm gray too— in your bright waxing dust; Where I riddle away with our cause. In this dizain, I pull on you near— Though we sidestep a shadow love, Falling stars flicker in eyes— my tears.

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Date: 9/9/2023 3:30:00 PM
Very lovely poem!
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Date: 9/8/2023 5:25:00 AM
I can feel the distance and the weeping ensues. God bless you, Paige!
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Date: 9/7/2023 4:19:00 PM
Paige, The scene is breathtakingly beautiful, with its vibrant colors and awe-inspiring sights. However, there is an underlying sense of sadness and nostalgia that tinges on the air, creating a bittersweet ambiance.
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Date: 8/31/2023 7:02:00 AM
Hauntingly beautiful.
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Date: 8/26/2023 4:16:00 AM
ah, this is amazingly beautiful and bitter sweet too. Have a precious day dear poet. keep writing :)
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Date: 8/24/2023 10:49:00 AM
Oh Paige, I love the way you use words. The emotions you portray - "grey," "falling stars flicker in my eyes - my tears" - draw on deeply felt feelings that you eloquently share in your poetry with just a touch of mystery seasoning your words! Well done my friend. Blessings!
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Date: 8/24/2023 3:45:00 AM
Though there is only a shadow love, it seems lasting ! Great dizian!
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Date: 8/24/2023 3:19:00 AM
The tears are a heartfelt moment in memory & experience. I love this. <3
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Date: 8/22/2023 4:51:00 PM
beautiful and delicate poem, enjoyed yann
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