Cloudy Morning

Clouds cradle for sun Repose in bedding that's worn Soft light peeking through

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Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/1/2009 10:41:00 PM

Oh... A Very Lovely, Visual Haiku

John Freeman

Date: 8/30/2009 1:06:00 PM

Quit right, clouds repose of bedding worn, Witty, conference, conferee, I'll agree! Sincerely Moses

Matt Caliri

Date: 8/30/2009 12:49:00 PM

This is very nice...I like line two. Just so you know, you don't have to keep reminding me to "keep writing" on your comments. I won't be stopping anytime soon, but thanks!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/30/2009 8:48:00 AM

I agree with James! I love your gentle poem here! Sara! jimmy

James Peranteau

Date: 8/30/2009 8:30:00 AM

Gentle poem dear poet,..I definately love the soft suns peek ! Beautiful write !!! james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2009 6:57:00 AM

Here it is Sunday and the begining of a new week is upon us. And August is leaving us way to soon. I am enjoying reading such excellent poems today and am happy to see your poetry among them Sara. May your pen forever flow. Love, Carol