Clouds of Misty Grey

Amidst thick clouds of misty grey, shifting shadows subdue sunlight. And shade the heat of Summer's day amidst thick clouds of misty grey. As Autumn seeks to find its way, the sun stays hidden out of sight. Amidst thick clouds of misty grey, shifting shadows subdue sunlight. The sun stays hidden out of sight, till breezes blow the leaves away. Aware of Winter's coming blight, the sun stays hidden out of sight. And shorter days see geese take flight as November colors decay. The sun stays hidden out of sight, till breezes blow the leaves away. As November colors decay, Winter's wretched winds wail wildly. And skeletal trees shake and sway, as November colors decay. Autumn doggedly tries to stay, reluctant to give up mildly. As November colors decay, Winter's wretched winds wail wildly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 5/26/2018 6:54:00 PM
A most enjoyable read, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/20/2017 12:53:00 PM
This is excellent, precised and highly intellectual. A huge 7 for me.
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Date: 5/21/2017 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Funom, as always, your comments are welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/19/2017 7:09:00 AM
This was beautiful Emile and so song like to me. It carries a melody that bring the reader in and holds them within the poem singing. Really nicely done.
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Date: 5/19/2017 10:42:00 AM
Thank you Chris, I really appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/19/2017 5:07:00 AM
Good Morning Emile. Wonderful Triolet aside because it will always be the words that matter most with me. This entry is outstanding starting with the title. Allow me to say this for the format you utilized the repetitive lines well and appropriately for the weaved into the entry and thoughts. Well done completely and entirely. Be proud of this one. Have a wonderful morning and day.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/19/2017 10:44:00 AM
Good morning Lisa, you have always given me wonderful reviews, and I thank you for that my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/18/2017 10:59:00 AM
Amazing Write, Emile ! Well done :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2017 1:35:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, your comments are both appreciated and eagerly sought, Emile.
Date: 5/18/2017 10:56:00 AM
Fascinating write and so on spot for the time of year you write about. I enjoyed this very much Emile :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2017 1:35:00 PM
Thank you Lenna, your comments are both appreciated and eagerly sought, Emile.
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