Emile Pinet Poet Triolet

Clouds of Misty Grey

Amidst thick clouds of misty grey,
shifting shadows subdue sunlight.
And shade the heat of Summer's day
amidst thick clouds of misty grey.
As Autumn seeks to find its way,
the sun stays hidden out of sight.
Amidst thick clouds of misty grey,
shifting shadows subdue sunlight.

The sun stays hidden out of sight
while breezes blow the leaves away.
Aware of Winter's coming blight,
the sun stays hidden out of sight.
And shorter days see geese take flight
as November colors decay.
The sun stays hidden out of sight
while breezes blow the leaves away.

As November colors decay,
Winter's frigid winds wail wildly.
And skeletal trees shake and sway,
as November colors decay.
Autumn doggedly tries to stay:
reluctant to give up mildly.
As November colors decay,
Winter's frigid winds wail wildly.

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Line Gauthier May 26, 2018 at 6:54 PM A most enjoyable read, Emile. Emile Pinet May 27, 2018 at 8:10 AM Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Funom Makama May 20, 2017 at 12:53 PM This is excellent, precised and highly intellectual. A huge 7 for me. Emile Pinet May 21, 2017 at 9:49 AM Thanks Funom, as always, your comments are welcome my friend, Emile.

Chris Green May 19, 2017 at 7:09 AM This was beautiful Emile and so song like to me. It carries a melody that bring the reader in and holds them within the poem singing. Really nicely done. Emile Pinet May 19, 2017 at 10:42 AM Thank you Chris, I really appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Lisa Ricci May 19, 2017 at 5:07 AM Good Morning Emile. Wonderful Triolet aside because it will always be the words that matter most with me. This entry is outstanding starting with the title. Allow me to say this for the format you utilized the repetitive lines well and appropriately for the weaved into the entry and thoughts. Well done completely and entirely. Be proud of this one. Have a wonderful morning and day. Emile Pinet May 19, 2017 at 10:44 AM Good morning Lisa, you have always given me wonderful reviews, and I thank you for that my friend, Emile.

Heidi Sands May 18, 2017 at 10:59 AM Amazing Write, Emile ! Well done :) Emile Pinet May 18, 2017 at 1:35 PM Thank you Heidi, your comments are both appreciated and eagerly sought, Emile.

Lenna Walker May 18, 2017 at 10:56 AM Fascinating write and so on spot for the time of year you write about. I enjoyed this very much Emile :) Emile Pinet May 18, 2017 at 1:35 PM Thank you Lenna, your comments are both appreciated and eagerly sought, Emile.