Clouds of Love and joy

Dear child, from clouds of cotton white,
If you should call,I will join your flight.
Your face upturned,a heavenly sight,
I'll come to you,with pure delight.

We'll play and laugh among the sky,
Hide and seek,just you and I.
Our hearts so light,we'll soar so high,
Time slipping high,as clouds drifting.

As long as you dwell in that place,
Amid the wisps of cloudy lace,
My mind and soul will seek your face
In that ethereal,peaceful space.

Our joyous game will never end,
As earth and heaven,sweetly blend.
My thoughts with yours will always blend.

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/22/2025 5:51:00 AM

Brilliant rhymes and rhythm, and excellent cadence throughout! Love the descriptive nature of your words woven here too such as “As long as you dwell in that place, Amid the wisps of cloudy lace, My mind and soul will seek your face In that ethereal,peaceful space.” Beauriful! And gives a serene touch! Pleasure reading . Sending you light

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/22/2025 8:33:00 PM