Jenna Logan Poet Rhyme

Clouds Conceal the Pallid Moon

Draw back the drapes of those tenebrous clouds
for my eyes desire a glimmer of the pallid moon.
Sullen shadows of night, her beauty enshrouds.
Covering her faint glow is a sin, I dare impugn.

Lustrous is her light when emerged in the night,
as pale as the alabaster skin of my love's cheek.
A pearl in the sky.  Passion's flame she will ignite,
reflected across waters in an aura of mystique.

Without the moon, my soul would mourn, bereft.
Her splendor worthy of lyrics written in musical bars.
I would write a sonnet for her if my hand was deft.
Even though her hue is wan, she outshines stars.

I'll not weep for the moon while her light wanes.
I'm aware that it's just a phase, and soon will pass.
Then, comes the time when her luminance reigns
and billowed nimbus will turn aside for her.  Alas!

If overcast shadows choose to darken the skies
let them do so to offer shade from the sun's heat,
but never allow them to conceal from my eyes
the trysting place where the pale moon and I meet.


July 22, 2022
One In Five 2 Contest
Sponsored by Joseph May
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Valsa George July 31, 2022 at 10:58 PM "I'll not weep for the moon while her light wanes. I'm aware that it's just a phase, and soon will pass. Then, comes the time when her luminance reigns and billowed nimbus will turn aside for her. Alas!"..... beautiful thoughts Jenna. Every shining thing will, in time ,lose its lustre.... but nothing to be lamented at as it is a only a passing phase . It can regain its lost glory at another time ! Wonderful poetry and so well deserved for the win. Congratulations ! Jenna Logan August 1, 2022 at 12:36 PM I truly appreciate your detailed review, Valsa. Thank you very much.

Terry Flood July 30, 2022 at 12:35 PM A magical write, Jenna, more than worthy of its top billing. Seems everyone here is enchanted by the moon. Fortunately, none of us admit to simply howling at it. Congrats on your deserved win. Terry Jenna Logan July 30, 2022 at 1:04 PM It's always held my interest, Terry. I'd howl at it and not care if anyone thought I was possessed. Lol Thanks for your kind congrats.

Joseph May July 30, 2022 at 9:37 AM "Her splendor worthy of lyrics written in musical bars", Congrats on your win Jenna Jenna Logan July 30, 2022 at 1:03 PM Thanks for including me in your list, Joseph.

Kim Rodrigues July 30, 2022 at 6:38 AM Jenna, I read this beauty after I had read a couple funny ones. Congratulations! You set the mood! Jenna Logan July 30, 2022 at 1:03 PM Thanks for reading and the congrats, Kim. This is the only theme that held my attention. Glad you like it.

Regina Mcintosh July 30, 2022 at 4:30 AM Beautiful write, sweet lady. God bless you and Congratulations on your top placement. Love, Gina Jenna Logan July 30, 2022 at 1:02 PM Thanks for the congrats, Gina. Me and nearly everyone else.

Steven Young July 26, 2022 at 11:59 AM "Passion's flame she will ignite, across waters in an aura of mystique" ...love that image... so romantic. Jenna Logan July 26, 2022 at 12:22 PM Thanks ever so much for your view and sweet remarks, Steven.

Michael Tor July 24, 2022 at 3:39 AM Your passion for Poetry involving the moon is clearly shown here Jenna. WOW! I love your unique descriptions that are crafted from a very gifted writer. This one is a favorite for me. Exceptional write to say the least... Thank you for sharing and your effort in making again congratulations... Jenna Logan July 26, 2022 at 12:21 PM I admit to being enamored with the heavens and the seas. I am quite honored by your accolades, Michael, and value each one.

Linda Alice Fowler July 23, 2022 at 7:57 AM What a delight Jenna. I love this tribute to the moon! Linda Linda Alice Fowler July 23, 2022 at 9:07 AM Yes, and I agree that you've done a great credit to the ubiquitous moon, also a favorite of mine (most of my haiku reflects ~no pun intended~ my love for it). Jenna Logan July 23, 2022 at 8:36 AM Thanks a lot, Linda. As a poet, you probably know how you feel when you've written something that you think you've done credit to. Well, this is one of those for me. Perhaps it's about one of my favorite subjects. I appreciate your thoughts.

David Kavanagh July 22, 2022 at 10:45 AM An aura of mystique, your own words sum up this wonderful poem better than I ever could Jenna, I have always believed the moon has a higher purpose than just a mere satellite of the earth, but it certainly has a great influence on your writing, excellent work, cheers David Jenna Logan July 23, 2022 at 5:51 AM I'm so pleased that you liked this one so much, David. I think of the moon as a mysterious woman, whose secrets should never be told. Thanks so much for your support of my poetry.

L Milton Hankins July 22, 2022 at 10:43 AM It's perfectly clear to me, if not to you, that more and more Soupers are reading and appreciating your work, Jenna. This is another poem worthy of wide reading and POTD (alas! too soon) or POTW! Moving, sensual, incredible imagery, masterful rhymes. You have flown "me to the moon." It's the best I've read today! Jenna Logan July 23, 2022 at 5:49 AM Dear Milt, I am very heartened by the praises you've offered these lines. Always, you find a way of making your comments amazing and encouraging. I value your judgement of poetry, so I am elated with joy over what you've felt about my love for this pallid moon.

John Gondolf July 22, 2022 at 8:54 AM I always enjoy poems about the moon and this one is absolutely beautiful, Jenna, nicely done. John Jenna Logan July 22, 2022 at 10:01 AM John, I have always been drawn to writing about celestial bodies and the sea. I appreciate that you do, too, and thank you for such welcomed thoughts.

Frederic Parker July 22, 2022 at 7:49 AM you have created a very serene yet emotion-filled poem, dear poet Jenna Logan July 22, 2022 at 7:51 AM I am very appreciative of your generous review. Thank you, Frederic.

Bill Baker July 22, 2022 at 7:47 AM Great entry for the contest, Jenna. Your descriptions and imagery are masterful. I enjoyed the flow and message of this poem. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill Jenna Logan July 22, 2022 at 7:50 AM Hello, Bill, and thank you for letting me know what you enjoyed in these lines. You made me smile, too.

Terrell Martin July 22, 2022 at 7:36 AM Jenna, this poem is more beautiful and uplifting than anything I could ever dream of writing or creating. You humble me and my writing and help me to see...what REAL poetry is all about. Thanks for the lovely lesson and congratulations on a wonderful write. Cheers, Terry Jenna Logan July 22, 2022 at 7:49 AM Terry, I'm lost for the proper words with which to express my gratefulness for your evaluation on this poem. If there's a lesson to be taught to you, it's certainly not the act of graciousness on your part. Thank you.