Clouds

Herds of white horses, galloping with flying manes across wide blue plains. January 6, 2016 For contest: The Troika: Haiku with hooves Sponsored by: John Lawless

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/24/2018 7:14:00 AM

Awesome imagery, Agnes.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2017 6:01:00 PM

Also I had to come back here and FAVE this one. Should have done it the first time!!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/7/2017 5:12:00 PM

What great imagery! You certainly are a contender!

Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/7/2017 7:44:00 PM

Thank you, Paulette.

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/7/2017 2:05:00 PM

Lovely piece Agnes, best wishes in the contest...

Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/7/2017 7:44:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2017 7:24:00 PM

this is absolutely gorgeous. I will be shocked if it is not placed!!

Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/7/2017 7:43:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea.

Chris Green

Date: 1/6/2017 4:32:00 PM

This poem is perfect for the contest. I really enjoyed this Agnes. Nicely done.

Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/6/2017 5:13:00 PM

Thank you, Chris.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/6/2017 4:15:00 PM

Beautiful, Agnes! 7

Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/6/2017 5:13:00 PM

Thanks, Kim.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2017 2:27:00 PM

- A great haiku for the contest, Agnes - Good luck :) - Best wishes for a happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/6/2017 2:29:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I wish you a nice weekend, too.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/6/2017 2:14:00 PM

very beautiful imagery Agnes good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/6/2017 2:15:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. I just drove, and there was this row of clouds that reminded me of horses - it was so beautiful.