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marshmallow clouds float.. across a sea of blue shades - - roasting in the sun...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/9/2012 8:06:00 PM
oh my gosh, this is wonderful. Roasting marshmallows. I LOVE it. Except I eat them BLACK. So those are not going to be sunny clouds for me, but thunderheads!!
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Joseph May
Date: 6/10/2012 9:37:00 AM
do they taste good like that?....now thats well roasted!
Date: 6/7/2012 1:08:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Joseph. Hope you have a beautiful evening. Love, Carol
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Joseph May
Date: 6/7/2012 1:22:00 PM
thank you Carol
Date: 6/7/2012 9:27:00 AM
good morning, Joseph i liked your poem, have yourself a lovely day~ALWAYS *PD
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Joseph May
Date: 6/7/2012 1:22:00 PM
thank you PD
Date: 6/7/2012 8:49:00 AM
Very nice haiku...
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Joseph May
Date: 6/7/2012 1:21:00 PM
thank you Leo
Date: 6/7/2012 6:24:00 AM
Marvellous Haiku here Joseph,A new way to look at the clouds. Anne
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Joseph May
Date: 6/7/2012 1:21:00 PM
thank you Anne
Date: 6/6/2012 8:48:00 PM
A rather tasty haiku you have served to us.
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Joseph May
Date: 6/6/2012 8:57:00 PM
thank you Joann..much appreciated

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