Clouds

Carefree days for dreaming
Come sit upon the grass
Cast your eyes above where
Clusters of clouds float by
Castles, dragons, mountains,
Camels, turtles and ships
Creations in the sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 1:55 PM
I enjoyed thinking about the shapes of clouds as I read your fine Pleiades poem, Jeanne. Your descriptions were all fine ones. Have a pleasant weekend, Bill
Hicks Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 2:17 PM
Thank you so much.
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September 15, 2023 at 6:06 PM
A fantastic Pleaides, Jeanne! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Hicks Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 7:50 PM
Thank you
Miller Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 1:04 AM
Wonderful; congratulations.
Hicks Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 10:39 AM
Thank you
May Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:40 AM
Very nicely penne Jeanne, Congrats on your win
Hicks Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 2:29 PM
Thank you. I haven't posted anything in quite a while, and this was a nice surprise.
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