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Clouds

Chunks like white cotton that Can float in sky. Clumps of Condensed water vapor Cause rain on earth, bringing Cheer in summers. Canvas Countryside they adorn. Could sometimes mean gloom too!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2023 1:31:00 PM

yes, I see you got a first place. So well deserved, my friend

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/15/2023 4:09:00 AM

Your Pleiades is outstanding. I am enamored with clouds and love writing about them. You've captured their essence perfectly. Leaving now to go outside for a walk and to check out the morning clouds. Have a wonderful day, Sara

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/14/2023 5:17:00 PM

Dearest Ani, your pleiades is beautiful. I adore the ethereal cloud imagery, especially "Canvas / Countryside they adorn". The change of mood with your last line "Could sometimes mean gloom too!" is a wonderful contrast that adds down-to-earth depth and dimension to your enchanting poem. Congratulations for your lovely win, my sweet friend. It's soo nice to see you back. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sam Scott

Date: 9/14/2023 5:04:00 AM

This flows so beautifully! Very well deserved first place, Anitha :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/14/2023 3:42:00 AM

Oh wow, this is such a beautiful take for the Pleiades contest.. The way you've described clouds so eloquently and impeccably within such few words.. Ah, absolutely stunning! "Clumps of condensed water vapor", "chunks like white cotton" And then ending line.. Yes clouds bring gloom too.. What s brilliant write, heartiest congratulations on the win! :)

Sam Scott
Date: 9/14/2023 5:35:00 AM

I agree - so very lovely

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/12/2023 11:43:00 AM

- So true and beautiful written, Ani :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Emilia James

Date: 9/12/2023 9:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Anitha. Emilia : )

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/12/2023 7:35:00 AM

A beautiful, descriptive write, Anitha! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Valsa George

Date: 9/11/2023 7:39:00 PM

Congratulations Ani. Beautiful Pleiades !

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/12/2023 2:48:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Valsa...~ Ani

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2023 3:40:00 PM

Congrats, Ani. I think yours scored above mine. GREAT job.

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/12/2023 2:47:00 AM

Thank you again dear Ria. Just enjoyed writing. ~ Ani

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/11/2023 12:38:00 PM

Thank God. You are back. What a writing! Post many more. We will disturb you with comments.

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/12/2023 2:46:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris. Still struggling to find time for my writing. Shall try to post now and then. ~ Ani

Joseph May

Date: 9/11/2023 5:56:00 AM

Wonderful write Anitha, Congrats on your win

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/11/2023 7:11:00 AM

Thank you so much Joseph, for the contest and my placement. Wrote a Pleiades after a long time. Enjoyed writing. God bless ~ Ani

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2023 10:28:00 AM

glorious envisioning of clouds, Ani. I like this a lot

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/12/2023 2:44:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend...~ Ani

Bill Baker

Date: 9/10/2023 10:25:00 AM

A lovely Pleiades, Ani. Your imagery makes it easy to see your clouds in my mind's eye. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 9/12/2023 2:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Bill....~ Ani