Clouds

Chunks like white cotton that
Can float in sky. Clumps of
Condensed water vapor
Cause rain on earth, bringing
Cheer in summers. Canvas
Countryside they adorn.
Could sometimes mean gloom too!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 1:31 PM
yes, I see you got a first place. So well deserved, my friend
Ashley Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 5:17 PM
Dearest Ani, your pleiades is beautiful. I adore the ethereal cloud imagery, especially "Canvas / Countryside they adorn". The change of mood with your last line "Could sometimes mean gloom too!" is a wonderful contrast that adds down-to-earth depth and dimension to your enchanting poem. Congratulations for your lovely win, my sweet friend. It's soo nice to see you back. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Scott Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 5:04 AM
This flows so beautifully! Very well deserved first place, Anitha :)
Sharma  Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 3:42 AM
Oh wow, this is such a beautiful take for the Pleiades contest.. The way you've described clouds so eloquently and impeccably within such few words.. Ah, absolutely stunning! "Clumps of condensed water vapor", "chunks like white cotton" And then ending line.. Yes clouds bring gloom too.. What s brilliant write, heartiest congratulations on the win! :)
Scott Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 5:35 AM
I agree - so very lovely
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 11:43 AM
- So true and beautiful written, Ani :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
James Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 9:04 AM
Congratulations on your win Anitha. Emilia : )
Merryman Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 7:35 AM
A beautiful, descriptive write, Anitha! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
George Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:39 PM
Congratulations Ani. Beautiful Pleiades !
Jayasankar Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 2:48 AM
Thank you so much dear Valsa...~ Ani
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 3:40 PM
Congrats, Ani. I think yours scored above mine. GREAT job.
Jayasankar Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 2:47 AM
Thank you again dear Ria. Just enjoyed writing. ~ Ani
Alex Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 12:38 PM
Thank God. You are back. What a writing! Post many more. We will disturb you with comments.
Jayasankar Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 2:46 AM
Thank you so much Chris. Still struggling to find time for my writing. Shall try to post now and then. ~ Ani
May Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Wonderful write Anitha, Congrats on your win
Jayasankar Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 7:11 AM
Thank you so much Joseph, for the contest and my placement. Wrote a Pleiades after a long time. Enjoyed writing. God bless ~ Ani
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 10:28 AM
glorious envisioning of clouds, Ani. I like this a lot
Jayasankar Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 2:44 AM
Thank you so much my friend...~ Ani
Baker Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 10:25 AM
A lovely Pleiades, Ani. Your imagery makes it easy to see your clouds in my mind's eye. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Jayasankar Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 2:43 AM
Thank you so much Bill....~ Ani
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