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Clouds

Chunks like white cotton that
Can float in sky. Clumps of
Condensed water vapor
Cause rain on earth, bringing
Cheer in summers. Canvas
Countryside they adorn.
Could sometimes mean gloom too!

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/27/2023 1:31:00 PM yes, I see you got a first place. So well deserved, my friend Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 9/14/2023 5:17:00 PM Dearest Ani, your pleiades is beautiful. I adore the ethereal cloud imagery, especially "Canvas / Countryside they adorn". The change of mood with your last line "Could sometimes mean gloom too!" is a wonderful contrast that adds down-to-earth depth and dimension to your enchanting poem. Congratulations for your lovely win, my sweet friend. It's soo nice to see you back. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Sam Scott Date: 9/14/2023 5:04:00 AM This flows so beautifully! Very well deserved first place, Anitha :) Login to Reply

Hiya Sharma Date: 9/14/2023 3:42:00 AM Oh wow, this is such a beautiful take for the Pleiades contest.. The way you've described clouds so eloquently and impeccably within such few words.. Ah, absolutely stunning! "Clumps of condensed water vapor", "chunks like white cotton" And then ending line.. Yes clouds bring gloom too.. What s brilliant write, heartiest congratulations on the win! :) Login to Reply Sam Scott Date: 9/14/2023 5:35:00 AM I agree - so very lovely

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2023 11:43:00 AM - So true and beautiful written, Ani :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs Login to Reply

Emilia James Date: 9/12/2023 9:04:00 AM Congratulations on your win Anitha. Emilia : ) Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 9/12/2023 7:35:00 AM A beautiful, descriptive write, Anitha! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 9/11/2023 7:39:00 PM Congratulations Ani. Beautiful Pleiades ! Login to Reply Anitha Jayasankar Date: 9/12/2023 2:48:00 AM Thank you so much dear Valsa...~ Ani

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/11/2023 3:40:00 PM Congrats, Ani. I think yours scored above mine. GREAT job. Login to Reply Anitha Jayasankar Date: 9/12/2023 2:47:00 AM Thank you again dear Ria. Just enjoyed writing. ~ Ani

Christuraj Alex Date: 9/11/2023 12:38:00 PM Thank God. You are back. What a writing! Post many more. We will disturb you with comments. Login to Reply Anitha Jayasankar Date: 9/12/2023 2:46:00 AM Thank you so much Chris. Still struggling to find time for my writing. Shall try to post now and then. ~ Ani

Joseph May Date: 9/11/2023 5:56:00 AM Wonderful write Anitha, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Anitha Jayasankar Date: 9/11/2023 7:11:00 AM Thank you so much Joseph, for the contest and my placement. Wrote a Pleiades after a long time. Enjoyed writing. God bless ~ Ani

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/10/2023 10:28:00 AM glorious envisioning of clouds, Ani. I like this a lot Login to Reply Anitha Jayasankar Date: 9/12/2023 2:44:00 AM Thank you so much my friend...~ Ani

Bill Baker Date: 9/10/2023 10:25:00 AM A lovely Pleiades, Ani. Your imagery makes it easy to see your clouds in my mind's eye. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Login to Reply Anitha Jayasankar Date: 9/12/2023 2:43:00 AM Thank you so much Bill....~ Ani