Clouds

"Why so grim?", Old Tom Cat asked,
but Little Kitten turned away –
stared at the sky with wistful eyes,
withdrawn from this sweet, golden day.

"Why so gloomy?", Old Tom prodded,
flicking Kitten with his tail.
"No room for melancholy thoughts
when sun is heavy on the vale." 

Little Kitten turned his head,
shaking off his pensive shroud.
"I want to be a bird", he sighed,
"and sleep upon a silver cloud." 

Old Tom's whiskers twitched a bit –
he had these feelings sometimes too,
but cats were cats and birds were birds,
grass was green and sky was blue.

"See here, Small Kit, let's run about,
scampering in meadow weeds,
caper through the dandelions,
loosening their soft, grey seeds.

Depression will soon float away
with all the downy fluff.
We'll make a million tiny clouds
and that will be enough."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Grieves Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 1:14 AM
Incredibly creative. Love it!
Lawless Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 3:00 PM
WOW....excellent personification tingling with "cat toy" jingling rhyme. A very uniques take on the eight word contest theme.
Kauffman Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 12:00 PM
Very creative use of the required words Angela. Children would love this tale. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
Fowler Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 6:31 AM
I love the whimsy in your write Angela. Very nicely done, and so cute! Congratulations on your win! :)
Maracle Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 6:08 PM
Thank you so much! I had fun writing this.
Agustin Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 4:25 AM
Wow! Congratulations. Your first posted poem is a winner. Keep on sharing your talent through your poetry. God bless you.
Maracle Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 6:07 PM
Thank you so much! I'm really happy to be writing.
Pinet Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 5:10 PM
Congratulations Angela, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Very well done, you were successful against a field of talented poets, my friend; Emile.
Maracle Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 3:24 AM
Thank you so much; that is really exciting! Such happy news!
Agustin Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 4:04 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Maracle Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 3:23 AM
Thank you so very much!
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