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Clouds

"Why so grim?", Old Tom Cat asked, but Little Kitten turned away – stared at the sky with wistful eyes, withdrawn from this sweet, golden day. "Why so gloomy?", Old Tom prodded, flicking Kitten with his tail. "No room for melancholy thoughts when sun is heavy on the vale." Little Kitten turned his head, shaking off his pensive shroud. "I want to be a bird", he sighed, "and sleep upon a silver cloud." Old Tom's whiskers twitched a bit – he had these feelings sometimes too, but cats were cats and birds were birds, grass was green and sky was blue. "See here, Small Kit, let's run about, scampering in meadow weeds, caper through the dandelions, loosening their soft, grey seeds. Depression will soon float away with all the downy fluff. We'll make a million tiny clouds and that will be enough."

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Date: 8/20/2023 1:14:00 AM
Incredibly creative. Love it!
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Date: 6/29/2023 3:00:00 PM
WOW....excellent personification tingling with "cat toy" jingling rhyme. A very uniques take on the eight word contest theme.
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Date: 6/29/2023 12:00:00 PM
Very creative use of the required words Angela. Children would love this tale. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Date: 6/22/2023 6:31:00 AM
I love the whimsy in your write Angela. Very nicely done, and so cute! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Angela Maracle
Date: 6/25/2023 6:08:00 PM
Thank you so much! I had fun writing this.
Date: 6/22/2023 4:25:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations. Your first posted poem is a winner. Keep on sharing your talent through your poetry. God bless you.
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Angela Maracle
Date: 6/25/2023 6:07:00 PM
Thank you so much! I'm really happy to be writing.
Date: 6/21/2023 5:10:00 PM
Congratulations Angela, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Very well done, you were successful against a field of talented poets, my friend; Emile.
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Angela Maracle
Date: 6/22/2023 3:24:00 AM
Thank you so much; that is really exciting! Such happy news!
Date: 6/14/2023 4:04:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Angela Maracle
Date: 6/22/2023 3:23:00 AM
Thank you so very much!

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