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Above The purple lake Pale sunrays spread like songs To burn away the shadows in My soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/1/2015 2:33:00 PM
NICE WIN...SKAT
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Date: 1/30/2015 8:35:00 PM
came back here again to let the beauty of this one sink in. I sure picked a good picture for you!!!! congrats again and again.
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Date: 1/29/2015 7:20:00 PM
Isaiah.. Your beautiful work captures the imagination and also the sole first place finish!
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Date: 1/28/2015 11:09:00 AM
Just outstanding.. so simple and yet so powerful. Congrats. BG
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Date: 1/28/2015 10:35:00 AM
Outstanding, Isaiah...congrats on your well deserved first place win!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:31:00 PM
!!! : > )...Way to go..Sara
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Date: 1/26/2015 5:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win witH this beautiful write. nad!
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Date: 1/26/2015 3:20:00 AM
lovely words....Seren
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Date: 1/25/2015 6:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this powerful poem.
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Date: 1/25/2015 4:16:00 PM
Stunning, my friend!... Congrats on top win!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:59:00 PM
Beautiful Isaiah...I can see why Andrea put this on top...big congrats
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:23:00 PM
Isaiah, finally here to congratulate you for a top win in my contest. I was back and forth on who to give first place to, but your great use of line breaks and other things finally decided it for me. Also, This color is my favorite of all the pictures shown and you really hit a home run with what you had to SAY about the picture, not just your beautiful imagery, but the entire beautiful message of it. That middle line is outstanding. Big congrats to you!
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations Isaiah on your top placement.
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:07:00 PM
Isaiah, congratulations on your 1st Place win! So few words say so much in your poem! Sandra
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Date: 1/25/2015 2:32:00 PM
No doubt, this excellent cinquain merited top spot, Isaiah! Well done...congratulations! // paul
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Date: 1/25/2015 2:10:00 PM
Isaiah, congrats on taking first place.
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Date: 1/25/2015 1:35:00 PM
My delight is to congratulate you on your number one spot Isaiah:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:13:00 PM
Just so beautiful this is :) Btw-Awhile ago you had a contest about a painting..I ve written a poem called Ballroom Delights ,those days.I hardly participate in contests infact I didnt enter yours,but tnks for being an inspiration : )
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:36:00 AM
You are so gifted...this is beautiful..Congrats on your Premium membership..the Kiss The Rain poem is lovely. BG
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Date: 1/14/2015 9:35:00 AM
I liked your poem. No one wants to say goodbye.
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Date: 1/13/2015 10:41:00 PM
Oh, I am so there! Excellent!!!
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Date: 1/13/2015 11:56:00 AM
So beautiful this is ..yes. Enchanting is the word!
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Date: 1/13/2015 11:50:00 AM
Such a stunning image - you have captured this so well in your poem- good luck in the contests:-) Hugs Jan xx
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