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Clouded Lake, Visual 6

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Above The purple lake Pale sunrays spread like songs To burn away the shadows in My soul.

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 10/13/2023 7:39:00 AM

Brilliant! Congratulations on masterfully written winning poem.

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2015 2:33:00 PM

NICE WIN...SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2015 8:35:00 PM

came back here again to let the beauty of this one sink in. I sure picked a good picture for you!!!! congrats again and again.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/28/2015 11:09:00 AM

Just outstanding.. so simple and yet so powerful. Congrats. BG

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/28/2015 10:35:00 AM

Outstanding, Isaiah...congrats on your well deserved first place win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2015 12:31:00 PM

!!! : > )...Way to go..Sara

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/26/2015 5:39:00 AM

Congrats on your win witH this beautiful write. nad!

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/26/2015 3:20:00 AM

lovely words....Seren

Greg Hoffman

Date: 1/25/2015 6:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win with this powerful poem.

Arlene Smith

Date: 1/25/2015 4:16:00 PM

Stunning, my friend!... Congrats on top win!.. Hugs.. Arlene

David Mohn

Date: 1/25/2015 3:59:00 PM

Beautiful Isaiah...I can see why Andrea put this on top...big congrats

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2015 3:23:00 PM

Isaiah, finally here to congratulate you for a top win in my contest. I was back and forth on who to give first place to, but your great use of line breaks and other things finally decided it for me. Also, This color is my favorite of all the pictures shown and you really hit a home run with what you had to SAY about the picture, not just your beautiful imagery, but the entire beautiful message of it. That middle line is outstanding. Big congrats to you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/25/2015 3:16:00 PM

Congratulations Isaiah on your top placement.

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/25/2015 3:07:00 PM

Isaiah, congratulations on your 1st Place win! So few words say so much in your poem! Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 1/25/2015 2:32:00 PM

No doubt, this excellent cinquain merited top spot, Isaiah! Well done...congratulations! // paul

Rob Carmack

Date: 1/25/2015 2:10:00 PM

Isaiah, congrats on taking first place.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/25/2015 1:35:00 PM

My delight is to congratulate you on your number one spot Isaiah:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/17/2015 7:13:00 PM

Just so beautiful this is :) Btw-Awhile ago you had a contest about a painting..I ve written a poem called Ballroom Delights ,those days.I hardly participate in contests infact I didnt enter yours,but tnks for being an inspiration : )

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/14/2015 10:36:00 AM

You are so gifted...this is beautiful..Congrats on your Premium membership..the Kiss The Rain poem is lovely. BG