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Clouded Lake, Visual 6

Above
The purple lake
Pale sunrays spread like songs
To burn away the shadows in
My soul.

imageryinspirationlightskycinquain

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Frances Schiavina

October 13, 2023 at 7:39 AM

Brilliant! Congratulations on masterfully written winning poem.

Skat A

February 1, 2015 at 2:33 PM

NICE WIN...SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2015 at 8:35 PM

came back here again to let the beauty of this one sink in. I sure picked a good picture for you!!!! congrats again and again.

Barbara Gorelick

January 28, 2015 at 11:09 AM

Just outstanding.. so simple and yet so powerful. Congrats. BG

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

January 28, 2015 at 10:35 AM

Outstanding, Isaiah...congrats on your well deserved first place win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

January 26, 2015 at 12:31 PM

!!! : > )...Way to go..Sara

Poesy Relish

January 26, 2015 at 5:39 AM

Congrats on your win witH this beautiful write. nad!

Seren Roberts

January 26, 2015 at 3:20 AM

lovely words....Seren

Greg Hoffman

January 25, 2015 at 6:31 PM

Congratulations on your top win with this powerful poem.

Arlene Smith

January 25, 2015 at 4:16 PM

Stunning, my friend!... Congrats on top win!.. Hugs.. Arlene

David Mohn

January 25, 2015 at 3:59 PM

Beautiful Isaiah...I can see why Andrea put this on top...big congrats

Andrea Dietrich

January 25, 2015 at 3:23 PM

Isaiah, finally here to congratulate you for a top win in my contest. I was back and forth on who to give first place to, but your great use of line breaks and other things finally decided it for me. Also, This color is my favorite of all the pictures shown and you really hit a home run with what you had to SAY about the picture, not just your beautiful imagery, but the entire beautiful message of it. That middle line is outstanding. Big congrats to you!

Richard Lamoureux

January 25, 2015 at 3:16 PM

Congratulations Isaiah on your top placement.

Sandra Haight

January 25, 2015 at 3:07 PM

Isaiah, congratulations on your 1st Place win! So few words say so much in your poem! Sandra

Paul Callus

January 25, 2015 at 2:32 PM

No doubt, this excellent cinquain merited top spot, Isaiah! Well done...congratulations! // paul

Rob Carmack

January 25, 2015 at 2:10 PM

Isaiah, congrats on taking first place.

Jan Allison

January 25, 2015 at 1:35 PM

My delight is to congratulate you on your number one spot Isaiah:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

January 17, 2015 at 7:13 PM

Just so beautiful this is :) Btw-Awhile ago you had a contest about a painting..I ve written a poem called Ballroom Delights ,those days.I hardly participate in contests infact I didnt enter yours,but tnks for being an inspiration : )