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Clouded

dusky hour
I'm tryin to sleep
these nite time showers
they become my beat
as I walk from bar to bar
wish I knew where you are
because you've clouded my mind



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Copyright © Kimmy Holmes | Year Posted 2008

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Carrie Richards

December 7, 2008 at 1:07 PM

Very soft. Congratulations on this poem being featured, it was lovely. ~ Carrie

December 7, 2008 at 4:37 AM

This is beautiful. Very sentimental and just to the point. Congratulations on being featured. Love, Chitra

December 5, 2008 at 5:30 PM

Kimmy - Congratulations on your featured write this week! Peace always and may you and your loved ones have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John

December 5, 2008 at 5:21 PM

Hi Kimmy, Congratulations on your feature of the week. Most deserving. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 2, 2008 at 4:07 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

December 1, 2008 at 4:41 PM

So much truth to your words--a sad lifestyle for some. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

December 1, 2008 at 4:03 PM

Congrats Kimmy on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar

Vince Suzadail Jr.

December 1, 2008 at 12:49 PM

Congratulations Kimmy on your poem "Clouded" being featured. Vince

November 30, 2008 at 9:32 PM

Kimmy that was both sad and beautiful - Be careful there is a lot of bad in this world - God Bless, MJ

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