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dark clouds gathering atmospheric pressure drops umbrellas unfold april showers fall huge raindrops pitter patter i dream of sunshine sun peeks through grey clouds scent of petrichor rises kids jump in puddles beautiful rainbow arcs sky with vivid colours warming zephyr breeze sun appears after the rain blackbird starts to sing again 5,7,5 each verse couplet 7,7 checked with HMS Sponsored by Joanna Daniel haiku sonnet Poetry Contest 05/29/23

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Terry Miller

Date: 6/14/2023 1:53:00 AM

Oh, this is very nice, Jan; congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2023 3:06:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Haiku/Sonnet contest, Jan - hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/13/2023 1:17:00 AM

I love this one, Jan, always have loved anything written about rain, congratulations:)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/3/2023 2:41:00 PM

So well created composed and described dark clouds , April showers, raindrops pitter patter, children play with puddles, and then your beautiful rainbow and thereafter the sun comes out . Very much how it happens In Sandton Johannesburg. A very enjoyable write a poem driven by vivid imagination. Loads of blessings Jennifer.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/1/2023 9:48:00 AM

Hi Jan, This is a good entry for the contest. You captured the "spring" season very well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis

Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/31/2023 10:55:00 AM

NICE. I always enjoy your poems. Hugs.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/31/2023 7:22:00 AM

Lovely imagery and comfort feel to your beautiful verse, my friend. Great for a win. Many blessings your way with hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/31/2023 6:15:00 AM

In exquisite verse, Jan, you evoke the longing for sunshine that resonates within me. The elegance with which you portray the rejuvenating power of spring showers is truly remarkable, despite the melancholy truth that they are a necessary catalyst for growth.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/30/2023 12:17:00 AM

You captured spring showers well Jan, sadly they're needed to make everything grow again. Just back from Norway, thankfully I didn't need a brolly but it was quite cold at times. The highlight of the cruise was meeting Anne-Lise in Haugesund. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 5/31/2023 2:09:00 AM

Oh how wonderful to meet Anne-Lise and Norway is so so so beautiful - think I've been there 4 times:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/29/2023 6:21:00 PM

It ain't over --- no: It hasn't started (!) 'til the blackbird sings. Sweet stuff, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/31/2023 2:09:00 AM

thanks GW:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/29/2023 1:18:00 PM

- Lovely poem, Jan ... I dream of sunshine, too :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2023 2:01:00 PM

thanks sweet Sunshine Smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/29/2023 1:15:00 PM

This is delightful, Jan! I’ve never seen a haiku sonnet before (you deserve a lot of credit for trying all these formats) and you have done a fabulous job with it! Best of luck in the contest…

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2023 2:01:00 PM

It's all new to me Ilene, I wrote this a week or so ago between exam support but forgot to post it till now. hugs Jan x

Lin Lane

Date: 5/29/2023 1:15:00 PM

Just like your write, Jan, weather the storm. Well wishes with your entry.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2023 2:00:00 PM

thanks so much Lin:-) hugs jan xx