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Cloudburst Aftermath

Cloudburst Aftermath Humid scent of soured pavement rises from a city’s steaming streets accompanied by rippling gutter streams babbling and choking on floating debris. I wave as wet winged voyagers cling to tawdry, fragile craft shooting the cobblestone rapids of Boston’s Beacon Hill. Wafting from the alleys of the rich - the detritus of wealth - an acrid stench, waste, mocking the grumbling bellies waiting on line at the dingy soup kitchen. I walk alone among Boston’s “Common” looking for the “cracks” they “fell” through. 11/22/2017 submitted to – Choose A Topic – Heartbreak and Loss

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Date: 1/2/2018 8:36:00 AM
this is very powerful wonderful read love it
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Date: 11/23/2017 2:17:00 PM
WOW!! Amazing writing. A Fav for me!
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Date: 11/23/2017 7:29:00 AM
You set a scene very adroitly and then give the old one two; the rich and poor. What will we write about if that is ever corrected? You handle the question well showing a side not often noticed. Even their garbage is snooty.
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Date: 11/23/2017 6:40:00 AM
Description of Boston to a “T”. No pun intended. Well done.
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Date: 11/22/2017 6:24:00 PM
The combination of alliteration and rhythm season this poetic veal to perfection.
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