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Cloud Walker

In above realms where light emits Comfort abounds all over The cloud walker tries to send All the light to subjects below Beyond, two lovers swathes in the light Surging with love each breath The walker of the clouds gladly glows And bathes the two with loving light … Unfortunately the superior light that graces The sweetheart two whom which illuminate Seems to have a fluctuation within its power The cloud walker falters, and lowers … Loves most powerful gracious light Loses some of its glow, downward plight The female of the couple loses sight Of the cloud walkers ever powerful light … Sadness creeps in, so horrible the confusion The cloud walker steps his foot on fading The couple now weeps as it knows the fate The end of the cloud walker is close … Feeling the light dissipate before their eyes The woman holds her lover and horribly cries Her hopes and dreams were left and denied Her tears leave her heart separate and untied … Crushing beneath the cloud walkers flicker The couple lays defeated on the ground The world has beaten the amazing light The cloud walker is dead, it is now night Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/11/2011 11:05:00 AM
Now a cloud walker is something to think about. Love the illusion and the story you paint with your pen. So full of imagination.
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Date: 8/10/2011 7:30:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “I Am Not To Hip Unto The Lore's Of The Cloud Walker Yet, I Am Unto One Named Jesus Christ *^_^* And His Glory Holds Everlasting Love & Light Within The Palms of His Majestic Hands *^_^* Hence For Those Within His Loving Bosom There Are NO Unfortuned Endings Yet Only, Joy Beyound Measure *^_^* But I Loved The Soulfulness I Found Amid Your Wonderful Poem My Friend; Extremely Touching!” === My Love Unto You & Yours, Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 8/10/2011 6:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem!!!!I enjoyed reading it!---Lori
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