Cloud Walker

In above realms where light emits
Comfort abounds all over
The cloud walker tries to send
All the light to subjects below
Beyond, two lovers swathes in the light
Surging with love each breath
The walker of the clouds gladly glows
And bathes the two with loving light
…
Unfortunately the superior light that graces
The sweetheart two whom which illuminate
Seems to have a fluctuation within its power
The cloud walker falters, and lowers
…
Loves most powerful gracious light
Loses some of its glow, downward plight
The female of the couple loses sight
Of the cloud walkers ever powerful light
…	
Sadness creeps in, so horrible the confusion
The cloud walker steps his foot on fading
The couple now weeps as it knows the fate
The end of the cloud walker is close
…
Feeling the light dissipate before their eyes
The woman holds her lover and horribly cries
Her hopes and dreams were left and denied
Her tears leave her heart separate and untied
…
Crushing beneath the cloud walkers flicker
The couple lays defeated on the ground
The world has beaten the amazing light
The cloud walker is dead, it is now night

Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/11/2011 11:05:00 AM
Now a cloud walker is something to think about. Love the illusion and the story you paint with your pen. So full of imagination.
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Date: 8/10/2011 7:30:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “I Am Not To Hip Unto The Lore's Of The Cloud Walker Yet, I Am Unto One Named Jesus Christ *^_^* And His Glory Holds Everlasting Love & Light Within The Palms of His Majestic Hands *^_^* Hence For Those Within His Loving Bosom There Are NO Unfortuned Endings Yet Only, Joy Beyound Measure *^_^* But I Loved The Soulfulness I Found Amid Your Wonderful Poem My Friend; Extremely Touching!” === My Love Unto You & Yours, Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 8/10/2011 6:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem!!!!I enjoyed reading it!---Lori
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