Elizabeth Cabrera Poet Blank verse

Cloud Nine

Here, to my right on cloud nine, 
sits God, finding my match.
He's back down on two.
I take the stairs, the elevator's full. 

Back on two, we reconcile,
thinking back to long conversations
of us, and you, and our future as one.

I had so much love to give,
but it seems I never had enough.

I'd tell you how much I love you,
but I can only write it.

So I'll put you next to God,
on cloud nine.
I'll take my place, besides you,
and inhale your scent.
Back on cloud nine,
I am free again.

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Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2016 at 12:12 PM Elizabeth Cabrera, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Love LINDA :)

Eric Boddie January 15, 2016 at 4:53 PM cloud nine is fine if you are inclined to reach the sublime....but the 2nd floor could mean more if you open the heart's door for what's in store....but all you truly need for your heart to feel freed is to proceed in the steps of Love indeed....because when that is done, you will only see fun underneath the sun assuring you that you have won....Beautiful write Elizabeth....;)

Skat A December 17, 2015 at 12:58 PM ELIZABETH, CONGRATULATIONS on your nice win. ~SKAT~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 15, 2015 at 11:20 AM Congratulations Elizabeth. Elizabeth Cabrera December 16, 2015 at 2:18 PM Thanks, Nayda!