Cloud Metaphor

Clouds in the sky reveal their intention Their color is always a dead giveaway, There is no known effective intervention. You know what’s coming if they are gray, Gathered in a group for a sky convention. If they are white and fluffy like cotton We do not give them a second thought They’ll soon pass over, entirely forgotten If a pleasant east wind they have caught I’ve thought, for a cloud, this is so rotten.
Written October 18, 2022

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Date: 10/21/2022 2:03:00 AM
This is oh so true! "Their color is always a dead giveaway,"
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/21/2022 8:54:00 AM
I love to sit and watch the big, fluffy ones, though.
Date: 10/18/2022 9:23:00 PM
They have been gray here lately Milton lots of rain. I guess that is better than snow. Are we ever happy with the weather?
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/19/2022 9:10:00 AM
I am, Michael, when the sky is a brilliant blue with white, fluffy clouds! Oh, yeah, any day....
Date: 10/18/2022 8:55:00 PM
...sunsets...dawns....dark clouds and rain against an uncovered sun.....well sir, its... grab the camera....and start shootin ; ) ....stans sand
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/18/2022 9:11:00 PM
Thanks, Stans. Appreciated it.
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