cloud hiku

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06/08/25

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First Place
Contest by Brian Strand

cosmic grievance ^ with loud thunder ~~~ clouds burst melting in tears …………

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 6/10/2025 12:02:00 AM

This is a beautiful and evocative piece of poetry! It paints a vivid image of a dramatic, emotional celestial event. Overall, it's a very concise yet impactful poem that creates a strong sense of drama and sorrow on a cosmic scale. Huge Congratulations, Ma'am Ani

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2025 10:59:00 PM

Way to go, Anisha. Big congrats