Cloud Caught

Delicious winds blew questions 
out of my contemplating hands.
I saw pieces, cloud caught,
sink inside soft, puffy mounds.
Without a why, I cried on 
hard but receptive land.

What I sensed my faith knew,
I would never understand.
When feeling partly cloudy
my attitude loses melody.

Opaqueness gathers aerosol
particles of confusion.
Moods must self-forage while
ponderings wander to confer
with logic's billowing haze.
This is ever the system when
intuition shush-whispers truth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Miller Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 1:44 AM
Truth may come not from an unclouded mind, but from enduring the weather of thought, excellent, congratulations CayCay
Swan Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 5:03 AM
I like the surprise words and the specificity of the verbs: delicious, melody, forage...Also exploring the complex relationships between attitude, faith, logic and truth. J:)
Onclaud Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 7:52 PM
did you get your mojo back, cay?...enjoyed this brooding mood of a poesy worthy of a fine win...huge congrats!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 10:05 AM
Your "Cloud Caught" is a wonderful write. Hope you are OK.... "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Hind Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:11 PM
I was wondering where you were, and now I see here you hurt your hand! I hope you're on the mend. Deep, and contemplative piece. Enjoyed your searching words
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