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Closure For the Day

Multi-Colored sky
      spreads shades of clouds far and wide
                  Light, reflecting time
              brings peace to the observer
               granting closure for the day



Heidi Sands

3/13/22

appreciationcolordaylighttanka

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Caren Krutsinger

April 5, 2022 at 1:28 PM

This brought peace ot me as I read.

Heidi Sands

April 5, 2022 at 2:05 PM

I am happy to hear that Caren. Thanks for letting me know :)

Sara Kendrick

March 30, 2022 at 4:44 PM

I enjoyed reading this creative work. Some sunsets are wonderful and add so much beauty to the ending of a day. Thanks for dropping by. As far as I know we are okay. Phyllis did not get to take the brace off her leg but has to wear it three more weeks, well tomorrow will only two more weeks. It has been hard on her. Sara

Heidi Sands

March 30, 2022 at 5:40 PM

Hi Sara . I am glad you enjoyed this. You are also welcome. Wow. That is a long time for Phyllis. I understand how that must be so hard. I hope you are well and have a nice evening. Thank you :)

Gershon Wolf

March 23, 2022 at 8:59 PM

Closure is always good, methinks... Hope all is well, Heidi. Best wishes always, Gershon

Heidi Sands

March 24, 2022 at 6:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. :)

Silent One

March 23, 2022 at 3:05 PM

Hey hope you are well....

Heidi Sands

March 24, 2022 at 5:59 AM

Thank you Silent One. Having some difficult times and the muse is challenging too. But I will be ok. I hope all is well. Thank you again, my friend :)

Jennifer Proxenos

March 22, 2022 at 2:11 AM

Sunsets can be the most beautiful sky one could ever see and gives a serene closure to a busy day - very beautiful Heidi. Hugs blessings Jennifer

Heidi Sands

March 22, 2022 at 6:30 AM

Yes. You are right Jennifer! I hope that you can see many! Thank you. Blessings. :)

Kim Rodrigues

March 21, 2022 at 12:42 PM

Beautiful, Heidi! It is like when you draw the curtains shut at end of day. Peace.

Heidi Sands

March 21, 2022 at 1:09 PM

Thank you Kim ! Peace be with you :)

Connie Marcum Wong

March 19, 2022 at 1:19 PM

I love the way you write Heidi. Your poems always give a serene feeling of joy. This poem is beautiful. Blessings xxoo

Heidi Sands

March 19, 2022 at 1:58 PM

Thank you so much Connie. I am happy to hear that. I hope you are having a nice day. Blessings :)

Jack Horne

March 19, 2022 at 9:21 AM

what a beautiful tranquil write

Heidi Sands

March 19, 2022 at 10:31 AM

Thank you Jack. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope you have a nice day :)

Joseph P. DiMino

March 17, 2022 at 7:02 PM

And a glass of good wine, and treasured company. Beautiful writing. A perfect mood. There is so much to grateful for, not to focus on the mishaps which, for most of us, dwarf the overwhelming good. Joe.

Heidi Sands

March 18, 2022 at 5:20 AM

Thank you Joe. Good points you have made :)

Debra L Brown

March 17, 2022 at 1:20 PM

Hi! Heidi, I found your tanka very tranquil. I like "Light, reflecting time," enjoyed, Blessings ~ Debra

Heidi Sands

March 17, 2022 at 1:54 PM

I am happy to hear that Debra. Thank you. Blessings :)

Honestly J.T.

March 17, 2022 at 10:11 AM

Cool poem -JT

Heidi Sands

March 17, 2022 at 10:13 AM

Thank you JT. Nice to see your comment. I hope all is well :)

Bj Legros Kelley

March 16, 2022 at 9:50 PM

Very restful, quiet and beautiful <3 You have a beautiful gift. You've painted such a tranquil and lovely image of the close of day in your sweet Tanka <3 ~BJ

Heidi Sands

March 17, 2022 at 5:24 AM

Thank you very much BJ. I appreciate your kind feedback. I hope you have a nice day :)

Charles Messina

March 16, 2022 at 2:32 PM

Beautifully described, Heidi. So lovely :)

Heidi Sands

March 16, 2022 at 4:28 PM

Thank you very much :)

Victor Buhagiar

March 16, 2022 at 9:58 AM

Loved your sunset description.

Heidi Sands

March 16, 2022 at 4:28 PM

Thank you very much :)

Judy Ball

March 16, 2022 at 7:36 AM

Ahh Sunset. A beautiful time of day when the Good Lord paints the sky in many bright colors. I find peace in the sunset and excitement in the sunrise. Dreamer that I am. Love this. Well done . God Bless, JB

Heidi Sands

March 16, 2022 at 8:32 AM

Thank you Judy. I love to see both and yes, the sunset brings much peace.God Bless :)