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Closure For the Day

Multi-Colored sky
      spreads shades of clouds far and wide
                  Light, reflecting time
              brings peace to the observer
               granting closure for the day



Heidi Sands

3/13/22

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/5/2022 1:28:00 PM This brought peace ot me as I read. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/5/2022 2:05:00 PM I am happy to hear that Caren. Thanks for letting me know :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/30/2022 4:44:00 PM I enjoyed reading this creative work. Some sunsets are wonderful and add so much beauty to the ending of a day. Thanks for dropping by. As far as I know we are okay. Phyllis did not get to take the brace off her leg but has to wear it three more weeks, well tomorrow will only two more weeks. It has been hard on her. Sara Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/30/2022 5:40:00 PM Hi Sara . I am glad you enjoyed this. You are also welcome. Wow. That is a long time for Phyllis. I understand how that must be so hard. I hope you are well and have a nice evening. Thank you :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/23/2022 8:59:00 PM Closure is always good, methinks... Hope all is well, Heidi. Best wishes always, Gershon Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/24/2022 6:00:00 AM Thank you Gershon. :)

Silent One Date: 3/23/2022 3:05:00 PM Hey hope you are well.... Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/24/2022 5:59:00 AM Thank you Silent One. Having some difficult times and the muse is challenging too. But I will be ok. I hope all is well. Thank you again, my friend :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/22/2022 2:11:00 AM Sunsets can be the most beautiful sky one could ever see and gives a serene closure to a busy day - very beautiful Heidi. Hugs blessings Jennifer Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/22/2022 6:30:00 AM Yes. You are right Jennifer! I hope that you can see many! Thank you. Blessings. :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/21/2022 12:42:00 PM Beautiful, Heidi! It is like when you draw the curtains shut at end of day. Peace. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/21/2022 1:09:00 PM Thank you Kim ! Peace be with you :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/19/2022 1:19:00 PM I love the way you write Heidi. Your poems always give a serene feeling of joy. This poem is beautiful. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/19/2022 1:58:00 PM Thank you so much Connie. I am happy to hear that. I hope you are having a nice day. Blessings :)

Jack Horne Date: 3/19/2022 9:21:00 AM what a beautiful tranquil write Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/19/2022 10:31:00 AM Thank you Jack. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope you have a nice day :)

Joe Dimino Date: 3/17/2022 7:02:00 PM And a glass of good wine, and treasured company. Beautiful writing. A perfect mood. There is so much to grateful for, not to focus on the mishaps which, for most of us, dwarf the overwhelming good. Joe. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/18/2022 5:20:00 AM Thank you Joe. Good points you have made :)

Debra L Brown Date: 3/17/2022 1:20:00 PM Hi! Heidi, I found your tanka very tranquil. I like "Light, reflecting time," enjoyed, Blessings ~ Debra Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/17/2022 1:54:00 PM I am happy to hear that Debra. Thank you. Blessings :)

Honestly J.T. Date: 3/17/2022 10:11:00 AM Cool poem -JT Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/17/2022 10:13:00 AM Thank you JT. Nice to see your comment. I hope all is well :)

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 3/16/2022 9:50:00 PM Very restful, quiet and beautiful <3 You have a beautiful gift. You've painted such a tranquil and lovely image of the close of day in your sweet Tanka <3 ~BJ Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/17/2022 5:24:00 AM Thank you very much BJ. I appreciate your kind feedback. I hope you have a nice day :)

Charles Messina Date: 3/16/2022 2:32:00 PM Beautifully described, Heidi. So lovely :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/16/2022 4:28:00 PM Thank you very much :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/16/2022 9:58:00 AM Loved your sunset description. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/16/2022 4:28:00 PM Thank you very much :)

Judy Ball Date: 3/16/2022 7:36:00 AM Ahh Sunset. A beautiful time of day when the Good Lord paints the sky in many bright colors. I find peace in the sunset and excitement in the sunrise. Dreamer that I am. Love this. Well done . God Bless, JB Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/16/2022 8:32:00 AM Thank you Judy. I love to see both and yes, the sunset brings much peace.God Bless :)

Mike Gentile Date: 3/16/2022 6:22:00 AM Beautiful Heidi! Light, reflecting time, such an intriguing thought you provoked! This one is just marvelous! Happy Wednesday xxoo Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/16/2022 6:47:00 AM Thank you so much Mike. Happy Wednesday :)

Harry Horsman Date: 3/15/2022 8:10:00 PM Lovely, peaceful poetry, Heidi, Love it. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/16/2022 4:51:00 AM Thank you so much Harry. I am happy you love it. I hope all is well and you have a nice day :)

Judy Ball Date: 3/15/2022 1:59:00 AM This is lovely Heidi. You paint a beautiful and serene picture here. Nicely done. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/15/2022 3:57:00 AM Thank you Judy. I appreciate your kind comment. God Bless :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/14/2022 5:55:00 PM Wow Heidi, these tanka are a challenge but you conquered this form with great beauty. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/15/2022 3:56:00 AM Thank you very much Connie. I hope all is well. Blessings :)

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 3/14/2022 2:24:00 PM Nice one Heidi, really good piece of brevity! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/14/2022 2:33:00 PM Thank you very much Gordon :)

Silent One Date: 3/14/2022 2:22:00 PM An excellent tanks, one that is vivid in its imagery due to the selection of words you have weaved together.. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/14/2022 2:32:00 PM I appreciate your kind feedback Silent One. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/14/2022 5:23:00 AM A peaceful way to close out the day looking up at the magic of multi colored sky. Always refreshing and soothing. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/14/2022 9:05:00 AM True Vijay! I appreciate your kind input always. Thank you. I hope you have a nice day :)