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Closure For the Day

Multi-Colored sky spreads shades of clouds far and wide Light, reflecting time brings peace to the observer granting closure for the day Heidi Sands 3/13/22

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/5/2022 1:28:00 PM

This brought peace ot me as I read.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/5/2022 2:05:00 PM

I am happy to hear that Caren. Thanks for letting me know :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/30/2022 4:44:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this creative work. Some sunsets are wonderful and add so much beauty to the ending of a day. Thanks for dropping by. As far as I know we are okay. Phyllis did not get to take the brace off her leg but has to wear it three more weeks, well tomorrow will only two more weeks. It has been hard on her. Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2022 5:40:00 PM

Hi Sara . I am glad you enjoyed this. You are also welcome. Wow. That is a long time for Phyllis. I understand how that must be so hard. I hope you are well and have a nice evening. Thank you :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/23/2022 8:59:00 PM

Closure is always good, methinks... Hope all is well, Heidi. Best wishes always, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/24/2022 6:00:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. :)

Silent One

Date: 3/23/2022 3:05:00 PM

Hey hope you are well....

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/24/2022 5:59:00 AM

Thank you Silent One. Having some difficult times and the muse is challenging too. But I will be ok. I hope all is well. Thank you again, my friend :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/22/2022 2:11:00 AM

Sunsets can be the most beautiful sky one could ever see and gives a serene closure to a busy day - very beautiful Heidi. Hugs blessings Jennifer

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/22/2022 6:30:00 AM

Yes. You are right Jennifer! I hope that you can see many! Thank you. Blessings. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/21/2022 12:42:00 PM

Beautiful, Heidi! It is like when you draw the curtains shut at end of day. Peace.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/21/2022 1:09:00 PM

Thank you Kim ! Peace be with you :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/19/2022 1:19:00 PM

I love the way you write Heidi. Your poems always give a serene feeling of joy. This poem is beautiful. Blessings xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/19/2022 1:58:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie. I am happy to hear that. I hope you are having a nice day. Blessings :)

Jack Horne

Date: 3/19/2022 9:21:00 AM

what a beautiful tranquil write

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/19/2022 10:31:00 AM

Thank you Jack. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope you have a nice day :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/17/2022 7:02:00 PM

And a glass of good wine, and treasured company. Beautiful writing. A perfect mood. There is so much to grateful for, not to focus on the mishaps which, for most of us, dwarf the overwhelming good. Joe.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/18/2022 5:20:00 AM

Thank you Joe. Good points you have made :)

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/17/2022 1:20:00 PM

Hi! Heidi, I found your tanka very tranquil. I like "Light, reflecting time," enjoyed, Blessings ~ Debra

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/17/2022 1:54:00 PM

I am happy to hear that Debra. Thank you. Blessings :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/17/2022 10:11:00 AM

Cool poem -JT

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/17/2022 10:13:00 AM

Thank you JT. Nice to see your comment. I hope all is well :)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/16/2022 9:50:00 PM

Very restful, quiet and beautiful <3 You have a beautiful gift. You've painted such a tranquil and lovely image of the close of day in your sweet Tanka <3 ~BJ

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/17/2022 5:24:00 AM

Thank you very much BJ. I appreciate your kind feedback. I hope you have a nice day :)

Charles Messina

Date: 3/16/2022 2:32:00 PM

Beautifully described, Heidi. So lovely :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2022 4:28:00 PM

Thank you very much :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/16/2022 9:58:00 AM

Loved your sunset description.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2022 4:28:00 PM

Thank you very much :)

Judy Ball

Date: 3/16/2022 7:36:00 AM

Ahh Sunset. A beautiful time of day when the Good Lord paints the sky in many bright colors. I find peace in the sunset and excitement in the sunrise. Dreamer that I am. Love this. Well done . God Bless, JB

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2022 8:32:00 AM

Thank you Judy. I love to see both and yes, the sunset brings much peace.God Bless :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/16/2022 6:22:00 AM

Beautiful Heidi! Light, reflecting time, such an intriguing thought you provoked! This one is just marvelous! Happy Wednesday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2022 6:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Mike. Happy Wednesday :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/15/2022 8:10:00 PM

Lovely, peaceful poetry, Heidi, Love it.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2022 4:51:00 AM

Thank you so much Harry. I am happy you love it. I hope all is well and you have a nice day :)

Judy Ball

Date: 3/15/2022 1:59:00 AM

This is lovely Heidi. You paint a beautiful and serene picture here. Nicely done. God Bless, JB

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/15/2022 3:57:00 AM

Thank you Judy. I appreciate your kind comment. God Bless :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/14/2022 5:55:00 PM

Wow Heidi, these tanka are a challenge but you conquered this form with great beauty. Blessings xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/15/2022 3:56:00 AM

Thank you very much Connie. I hope all is well. Blessings :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/14/2022 2:24:00 PM

Nice one Heidi, really good piece of brevity!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/14/2022 2:33:00 PM

Thank you very much Gordon :)

Silent One

Date: 3/14/2022 2:22:00 PM

An excellent tanks, one that is vivid in its imagery due to the selection of words you have weaved together..

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/14/2022 2:32:00 PM

I appreciate your kind feedback Silent One. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/14/2022 5:23:00 AM

A peaceful way to close out the day looking up at the magic of multi colored sky. Always refreshing and soothing.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/14/2022 9:05:00 AM

True Vijay! I appreciate your kind input always. Thank you. I hope you have a nice day :)