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Closer Than a Kiss

You guide me each day
You lift me up when I pray
Through friends and loved ones
My God, You’re really  awesome
Closer than kiss is your love


Jan. 4, 2013
11:50 PM




Ninth Place
Contest: A Catch-Phrase Dazzler: 1 In 5 Choice
Judged:12/3/2012
Sponsor: Poet Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © Len Gasun | Year Posted 2013

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Debbie Duncan Date: 3/9/2013 2:17:00 PM Well this is very nice ;} Login to Reply

Sukmawati Komala Date: 2/18/2013 6:35:00 PM hi my beautiful poetess Leonora...just stopping to enjoy your sweet write :) lov and lights... all the best for you my sweet friend :) <3 <3 <3 Sk Login to Reply

Betty Bolden Date: 2/11/2013 4:17:00 AM great write on this Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/3/2013 6:14:00 PM hello, Leonora. HOpe you don't get so busy that you can't write some more. wishing you a great new week. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Sean L Sanders Date: 1/30/2013 9:46:00 AM Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/26/2013 11:50:00 PM Congratulations on your win with this glorious tanka. Login to Reply

Sadaf Syed Date: 1/24/2013 2:08:00 AM Loved this :):) was wondering what it was about when read the title:)...Sadaf Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/22/2013 12:43:00 AM Hi sweet Leo. .. stopping by to say goodnight. .. I will make my way here in the morning to say hi and read your poem...my forever loving sis.... ta ta for now....Linda Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 1/22/2013 8:07:00 AM Thank you so much my dearest sisie-pooh! It's always my pleasure. My big sweetest hugs will come back to you! love much, Leonora

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 1/20/2013 8:07:00 PM This is really a wonderful analogy, your title makes me think, what could be closer than a kiss, now I amazed by the answer :D - hug, yanny Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 1/20/2013 4:09:00 PM A wonderful poem. Thanks for your comment. love phyl Login to Reply

Irfana Ali Bhat Date: 1/20/2013 7:48:00 AM This is soo reassuring....a lovely poem...thanks for ur comment on my poem...:)) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/10/2013 6:40:00 PM Leonora, I am glad to see you back commenting today. Sure hope to see some new poems soon, sweetie!! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/10/2013 2:03:00 PM Congrats on your winning work..We thought on the same level in this contest..Sara Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 1/10/2013 11:22:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Love your poem. God bless. Lucilla Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 1/9/2013 2:13:00 AM Belated congratulations on your winning spot once more Leonora love xx Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 1/8/2013 7:41:00 PM congrats on a fine win Leonora Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/8/2013 7:18:00 PM Congratulations, my friend, for your win in my contest. This kind of poem could only be written by someone with a very sweet heart. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/8/2013 6:39:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Vesna Kovrlija Date: 1/6/2013 11:40:00 PM Lovely poem! Login to Reply

Toquyen Harrell Date: 1/6/2013 3:26:00 PM Ohh, so gooood! I love it. Yes, He is closer than a kiss. So true, Leonora. I hope you win with this one! Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 1/6/2013 11:28:00 AM I really enjoyed this Leonora; I guess This is for Andreas contest I hope you Get a high place with it.." Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/6/2013 1:40:00 AM Sweet and more intimate than a kiss. Great dedication to our amazing God. Login to Reply

Rollo West Date: 1/5/2013 10:35:00 PM Hello dear friend, what a great write and love the last line, really well penned. Rollo Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 1/5/2013 10:08:00 PM Lovely Leonora xx Login to Reply

Jackie Thomas Date: 1/5/2013 6:07:00 PM This is a great poem! Login to Reply

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