Closed Lines

Brightness fading Time takes its toll Green encroaches the outer shell Putrid smells clouding heads Weak and beaten Lifeless and broken Structure deteriorating One last adventure A final memory Boxes waiting to be filled A final resting place

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Skat A

Date: 8/17/2013 10:39:00 PM

BRI, ---CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2013 9:43:00 PM

Hello Bri, thanks for the closing imagery... Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA

Skat A

Date: 5/9/2013 8:58:00 PM

Hello Bri, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2013 10:25:00 PM

Deep Bri "Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda: many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems. I Hope you find what you are looking for when it comes to poetry inspiration. I would love to offer any poem you recommend positive feedback. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"

Kim Van Breda

Date: 4/28/2013 4:54:00 AM

Beautiful and touching poem. Well done and welcome to P/Soup