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Closed Heart

My heart is closed to you
Don't bother to knock
Don't bother to ring the bell
Don't bother to leave a gift on my doorstep
It won't do
It won't do
You hurt me through and through
It's over
It's true
My heart is closed to you!

Adieu!

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Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 9/26/2014 5:18:00 AM Oh mon Dieu! That firm? That's my girl! It is so beautiful your writing, so determent, so powerful, dear Eileen! Where are you? You are missed! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 9/23/2014 3:48:00 PM Knowing you Eileen I am sure you will leave the door so very very slightly ajar...just in case. You are too good not to allow forgiveness another chance. // paul Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 9/22/2014 8:53:00 PM You go girl. You're got the power. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/21/2014 8:31:00 AM I can't imagine you with a closed heart, it is so contrary to your loving nature. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/21/2014 2:20:00 PM Thank you, Richard. I'm trying very hard to change this nature. My heart is battle scarred and tired. I'm tired. Thanks for the visit and for the kind words.

Justin Bordner Date: 9/20/2014 6:53:00 PM Your justice is decisive, your heart armed. Powerful poem Eileen...J.A.B. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/21/2014 2:22:00 PM Thank you, Justin. I'm trying very hard to be powerful and decisive. My heart bleeds easily and is unruly. I'm trying to discipline it with a firm hand of reason. Glad you could pass by.

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/20/2014 5:46:00 PM Sometimes the simplest of rhymes are the best. This is one of those. It says it all and so well. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/20/2014 5:58:00 PM Maurice...I've missed your visits. Welcome, my dear...

Ken Carroll Date: 9/20/2014 4:03:00 PM Well crafted confessional write Eileen! Hope you're having a lovely weekend.. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/20/2014 5:58:00 PM SO far...so good, Ken. Good to see you back with a sizzler! :)

Arthur Vaso Date: 9/20/2014 4:02:00 PM Another masterpiece! Loved it! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/20/2014 5:58:00 PM Shucks...you say that to all the pretty poets! ;)

Gry Christensen Date: 9/20/2014 12:09:00 PM Clear message in the form of a nice little poem. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 9/20/2014 5:56:00 PM Thank you for visiting...and welcome! :)