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Closed Doors

God, I don't think im ready my confidence is drowning like a Louisiana levee I don't feel prepared and all that comes won't be shared I don't posses what I feel is mine I feel like i've forgotten how to rhyme I'm hungry like im poor and I keep meeting up with closed doors But when I go where I go, sometimes I get lost I get led on and I get forgot So I approach life anxiously because I know more pain waits for me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/1/2012 1:18:00 PM
Fear often holds us back in one way or another... Confort is often hard to find... Sometimes it is because you need to make some changes in what you are looking for... Your poem opens many questions... Well said... Much is implied.
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Date: 3/1/2012 1:40:00 AM
Very well written, Leila. Life is not easy. - oxox Anne-Lise
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