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I thought this was done That chapter was closed And my memories froze Days went by Sometimes, I cried And often, I just survived My emotions get crazy Every thought is racing My voice is shaking I have to say goodbye He doesn't have much time And I must act like I'm fine I pick up the phone Tears just overflow in my eyes Your chapter might have closed But feelings arose I found a blank page For your story to go But now it's too late And I'll never know My page remains blank With everlasting heartache

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Date: 5/18/2017 7:18:00 AM
Emotional breakup poem.
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Date: 5/14/2017 7:07:00 PM
A lot of emotions in this poem as many of us could probably relate. A beautiful piece of writing ??
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Date: 2/24/2017 9:17:00 AM
This was such well written sadness. You have expressed these emotions nicely. I love the last two lines.
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Date: 2/23/2017 6:20:00 PM
Welcome to PS. This could apply to many "goodbyes," i.e. a lover, child leaving for college ("I must act like I'm fine."). Nice.
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Date: 2/22/2017 11:45:00 PM
What a sad story you tell with your poem. The fact that the lines are so short, underlines the sort of haste that you (I think) try to convey. It works well, Great first poem on PoetrySoup. Welcome :)
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Olivia Hooper
Date: 2/23/2017 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much!

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