Clocks

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Captivating ordinary lives with their hypnotic motions, Leisurely moving on to eternity through cosmic oceans, Oblivious colors go by, in the days and in rosy seasons, Creamy moon and yellow sun, gives joy many reasons. Kinetically charged, ancient time, with God on its side, So silken and smooth flowing, like a molten gold slide.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/1/2022 7:33:00 PM

You give time a dali-like effect!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/1/2022 7:48:00 PM

Thank you so much. ;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/31/2022 6:39:00 PM

You've taken a mechanical gadget and turned into a wondrous dreamsicle! Kudos, Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/31/2022 8:44:00 PM

Thanks so much for your positive thoughts, Gershon. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/31/2022 4:24:00 PM

I am so glad I am not ordinary, so time means nothing to me... Getting too old has its own advantages. Not being aware of what is happening is one of them. Nice... very nice

Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/1/2022 8:53:00 AM

It fascinates me as well... if instead of forward, I go backward, I get younger, but if I go up, I'll live forever... am I right?? Be well, my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/31/2022 8:35:00 PM

Time fascinates me. It goes backwards and forwards, while standing still in the present. Thank you very much for the compliment. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/31/2022 1:13:00 AM

You always hypnotise me with your colors. Great.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/31/2022 9:53:00 AM

Many thanks. :)